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If Walls Could Speak

Saturday Night... You’re here, in the flesh; tall, handsome, and where nothing stands between us but our breaths... softly, yet eagerly exchanging warm, casual greetings Tonight, in the absence of distance, time is defunct; obsolete... And if these walls could speak, they would tell of the blazing sparks that fly when our eyes meet and how quickly I have to look away or I would melt like fresh, creamy butter in sunlight at noon! ~*~ 9/7/13 For "Mr. Incredible"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 5/8/2014 8:31:00 AM
Brought back sweet memories of a fine lady that cared for me in my youth. Alas, as young man I had much to learn and failed to hold onto her. Going right into my fav poems because it touched my heart and stirred my soul. Beautiful words!
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 5/8/2014 9:29:00 PM
Awww ...thank you very much, Robert...I truly appreciate your kindness. Have a great weekend!
Date: 11/28/2013 10:09:00 AM
omg.. im melting right now diving inside your poem.. it is ellegantly hot! wonder who is he, Annalise
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Date: 11/14/2013 12:39:00 PM
A passionate write! Annalise I enjoyed seeing this side of you.
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Date: 9/22/2013 4:17:00 PM
enjoyed reading this gem again, my friend - and I hope all is going very well...
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Date: 9/15/2013 11:59:00 PM
Lovely penmanship dear Annalise. I really enjoyed perusing this.
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Date: 9/15/2013 7:28:00 PM
Sounds like you have found a real "catch" . Nice and very "upbeat" poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/11/2013 9:08:00 PM
graceful poem...xox..Linda
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Date: 9/10/2013 1:25:00 PM
just dreamy, annalise... you make me melt woth your graceful sway and romantic approach.. i so love this one...wonderful work!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/9/2013 1:48:00 AM
- A very lovely poem, Annalise ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2013 10:26:00 PM
This is a very deep and passionate write my friend! I could feel the greatest sensuous emotions coming from this poem! I truly loved reading this enlightening piece this evening! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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