Audrey Haick Poet Narrative

If Walls Could Speak

Saturday Night...
You’re here, in the flesh; tall and handsome, where nothing stands between us
but our breaths... softly, yet eagerly exchanging warm, casual greetings 
Tonight, in the absence of distance, time is defunct; obsolete...
And if these walls could speak, they would tell of the blazing sparks that fly
when our eyes meet and how quickly I have to look away
or I would melt like fresh, creamy butter in sunlight at noon! 
~*~
9/7/13
For "Mr. Incredible"

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Robert Lindley May 8, 2014 at 8:31 AM Brought back sweet memories of a fine lady that cared for me in my youth. Alas, as young man I had much to learn and failed to hold onto her. Going right into my fav poems because it touched my heart and stirred my soul. Beautiful words! Audrey Haick May 8, 2014 at 9:29 PM Awww ...thank you very much, Robert...I truly appreciate your kindness. Have a great weekend!

Dinda Minardi November 28, 2013 at 10:09 AM omg.. im melting right now diving inside your poem.. it is ellegantly hot! wonder who is he, Annalise

Timothy Jacks November 14, 2013 at 12:39 PM A passionate write! Annalise I enjoyed seeing this side of you.

Jack Horne September 22, 2013 at 4:17 PM enjoyed reading this gem again, my friend - and I hope all is going very well...

Mustapha Mohammed September 15, 2013 at 11:59 PM Lovely penmanship dear Annalise. I really enjoyed perusing this.

Matthew Anish September 15, 2013 at 7:28 PM Sounds like you have found a real "catch" . Nice and very "upbeat" poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A September 11, 2013 at 9:08 PM graceful poem...xox..Linda

Nette Onclaud September 10, 2013 at 1:25 PM just dreamy, annalise... you make me melt woth your graceful sway and romantic approach.. i so love this one...wonderful work!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2013 at 1:48 AM - A very lovely poem, Annalise ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey September 8, 2013 at 10:26 PM This is a very deep and passionate write my friend! I could feel the greatest sensuous emotions coming from this poem! I truly loved reading this enlightening piece this evening! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!