Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

If Time Marched Backward

Time marches on so the gurus say
Brilliant deduction, the best for today
If time moved backward
Starting as an old bastard
Ending as a teenager riding a skateboard all day

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Tom Cunningham February 28, 2020 at 8:48 PM We'd be crawling on the floor lol, you could teach all the young fillies about the birds and bees second time around lol Tom Cunningham February 29, 2020 at 7:51 AM No, just a love of art like you lol Jack Ellison February 29, 2020 at 6:30 AM Interesting!!! LOL, Methinks you have a young filly obsession!

Richard Lamoureux February 28, 2020 at 9:42 AM If we could choose when to engage the rewind that could work out pretty good. I think I could have some great fun making the same mistakes again and add in a few more for good measure. Just throw caution to the wind. Jack Ellison February 28, 2020 at 10:53 AM Uh ya! Choosing when we could make the same great mistakes but even more betterer!!! LOL

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 28, 2020 at 9:14 AM Love this Jack! xomo <3 Jack Ellison February 28, 2020 at 9:27 AM Interesting concept eh!!! LOL Thanks for your niceness sweet Mo!!! Lovesies, Jack Ellison XOXOX