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If Time Marched Backward

Time marches on so the gurus say Brilliant deduction, the best for today If time moved backward Starting as an old bastard Ending as a teenager riding a skateboard all day

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Date: 2/28/2020 8:48:00 PM
We'd be crawling on the floor lol, you could teach all the young fillies about the birds and bees second time around lol
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/29/2020 7:51:00 AM
No, just a love of art like you lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/29/2020 6:30:00 AM
Interesting!!! LOL, Methinks you have a young filly obsession!
Date: 2/28/2020 9:42:00 AM
If we could choose when to engage the rewind that could work out pretty good. I think I could have some great fun making the same mistakes again and add in a few more for good measure. Just throw caution to the wind.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/28/2020 10:53:00 AM
Uh ya! Choosing when we could make the same great mistakes but even more betterer!!! LOL
Date: 2/28/2020 9:14:00 AM
Love this Jack! xomo <3
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/28/2020 9:27:00 AM
Interesting concept eh!!! LOL Thanks for your niceness sweet Mo!!! Lovesies, Jack Ellison XOXOX

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