If This Was My Last Poem

If this was my last
poem, I should suffer
immeasurably.

I’d wake
late in the day-
there’d be nothing
in the early light
of collective awakening
to record in cursive letters.

I’d eventually lose
my sight
for irony and ecstasy
in the mundane, then
life would be perfectly
uninteresting.

The ream of used printer paper
recycled for blotted thoughts
would gather dust
and no more dreams.

This pen would be left
in an old coffee mug,
standing nib-up
until its ink dried. When

taken later to quickly scribble
an address or number
it would grate
angrily against
the grain.

I’d let my wrist
loose and jerk
the pen and the air
would be moved
to whip me.

I’d feel shame
for once
I had used this pen
as a whip.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 12:21 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 8:39 PM
SAM, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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February 28, 2015 at 9:14 PM
Sam, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
A  Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 9:36 PM
Sam, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Allison Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 1:27 PM
I cant imagine stopping writing it is like an addiction - but a good one! Hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 1:37 PM
Oh Wow Sam I am delighted I dropped by and I am the first to comment! - Read as widely as you can here and people will comment back - i only started writing just over a year ago and am having the time of my life! Hugs jan xx
Rappaz Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Hi Jan! I can't stop writing either. This poem was inspired by the prompt, "Last words". :) Thank you for reading and for the lovely comment. This is my first post at PoetrySoup. Excited! Hugs, Sam xx
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