If These Walls Could Talk

I wish these walls would talk
        Of your slavery in the dark
They would tell your throat’s pain
         The countless times you remain 
Talking throughout the night
         Entertainer of the prized fight
Your buttons they push and poke
         You overworked entertaining bloke
You are expected to carry the news
         Tell the stories of the famed and abuse
If the walls that house your tired brain
         Could talk how tired you are and lame
Then maybe someone would show pity
         Allow you to rest so you could feel pretty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/20/2012 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joy. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2012 6:04:00 AM
great poem, well done. Congratulations on your win. Wonder what the walls of the underground railway would say, I live close to many buildings where people hid. Well done. Lee
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/20/2012 7:49:00 AM
That's some deep thought there Lee...the stories would make our modern-day stomachs churn. Tnx for your congrats. One love.
Date: 9/18/2012 3:30:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/18/2012 9:28:00 PM
Thanks and blessings, Sara.
Date: 9/18/2012 1:17:00 PM
Love this line "If the walls that house your tired brain"....awesome write! Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/18/2012 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia
Date: 9/18/2012 8:07:00 AM
AWESOME COGRATS JOY ON A BRILLIANT WRITE AND WIN LUV .. MOST CREATIVE AND ALWAYS A RARE TREAT TO READ YOUR WORDS MY FRIEND ..
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/18/2012 9:29:00 PM
Thanks LM..one love!
Date: 9/17/2012 9:11:00 PM
what a cool poem this is. I can't believe I never saw and commented on it earlier. It's a very interesting one. Congrats on your win.
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/18/2012 9:31:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...one love!
Date: 9/17/2012 5:47:00 PM
Interesting things those walls would say..Enjoyed reading..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/17/2012 6:49:00 PM
Tnx Sara!
Date: 9/17/2012 12:25:00 PM
darn good write, joy... applause to you for your special win!...:) hugggs
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/17/2012 2:38:00 PM
thanks Nette...one love
Date: 9/17/2012 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations Joy on your win in the contest!Love this poem.
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/17/2012 2:39:00 PM
thank you Kash!
Date: 9/17/2012 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your #3 win in my contest! I liked the attitude in this piece :)
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/17/2012 2:39:00 PM
thanks Susan for liking my piece for 3rd win...blessings
Date: 9/17/2012 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations Joy on your terrific write and win xx
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/17/2012 2:40:00 PM
Tnx Mandy! One love.
Date: 9/17/2012 10:26:00 AM
JOY, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/17/2012 2:41:00 PM
Tnx Pd...a blessed and fulfilling day to you too.
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