If These Walls Could Talk

If the walls around us could talk they would have spilled all the beans what you had done to her last summer and along with that your many a sin. If the walls around us could talk we'd have to arrange an open space I bet to discuss the minutes of closed door meetings and to keep those things a top secret. If the walls around us could talk so many mysteries would have been solved how that man was killed in his apartment and who were the culprits involved. If the walls around us could talk perhaps we would have a different history we might have avoided so many deaths our progress would have been a different story. If the walls around me could talk they would have told me to stop writing and make some changes in this poem before its final posting:) =================000================ Date:13th September 2012
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Duncan Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 10:09 AM
Very well done Kash,,,, if this internet could talk, it would explode ;} have a blessed day ;}
Minardi Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 10:10 AM
If only it happened, i would choose house of woods. A really great writing, Kash :)
Kovrlija Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Simply, truly beautiful!
Johnson Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 6:32 AM
The shadow knows inside these walls. The darkened light nature befalls. Outside in air so fresh and sweet. I hope some day we all can meet.
Delacroix Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 10:21 PM
:) now way!! No changes! This is so good! Loved it! Glad I found it. A job well done, Kash, and easy for us all to relate. Oh, yes, if the walls could talk .... hmm :) Thought provoking. Caroline.
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 10:45 AM
you're alive , kashi!... give me more poetry!.:) huggs!
Gasun Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 8:36 PM
Wow! A real awesome write my friend, Kash. I wish you all the best and luck in the contest! Thank you so much for stopping by and your inspiring comments. hugs:)
Horne Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 3:08 PM
love this thought provoking write, Kash - and had a chuckle with the last stanza : )
Liwayway Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 9:04 AM
wow!! an awesome poem Kash..I like it. Good luck in the contest. :) and thanks for dropping by.
Macfarlane Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:12 PM
So serious and then makes you smile at the end....great poem! Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 7:08 PM
Hi, again, Kash!!!
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 4:44 PM
If for a contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by with congrats.I would think that some walls in some areas of the US would have some tales to be told...Sara
Wellington Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 3:23 PM
Hey...don't change anything Kash. This poem is perfect. I like the way how you touched on different scenarios. A sure winner! One love. Joy Wells
Onclaud Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 1:44 PM
a fascinating musing with images so memorable...well done, kashi.. a winner for sure!..:) huggs
Neels Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Kash, this is one clever gem and your wit added makes it perfect! Hope your weekend will be an awesome one ;)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:44 AM
a phenomenal poem Kash expressed with mystery and suspense .. luv the storyline my friend .. wishing u a sweet success ..
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:36 PM
hahahaha, such serious stuff and suddenly that last stanza appears out of nowhere. This is really clever and funny, Kashinath. ME LIKES!!!! I hope it does well in the contest for ya. I'm OUT Of here. My shoulder was ok before I started with internet tonight. Friday is coming. YAYYYYYY
A   Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 9:48 PM
always nice reading your work,,, dear poet Kash....pd
Sivey Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Ha, ha, I love that last stanza my friend, very clever! This is a very meaningful poem, a write of inspiration and intrigue! I love your expressions you used for this incredible poem, awesome write Kashi! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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