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If the Stars Are Twice As Nice

If a star is twice as massive as the sun, my heart has no cause to roam or run. I will sojourn in the sparkles of the skies, staring at the bright light in your eyes. If love is truly as timeless as light and life, I will woo the world to make you my wife. We shall fly without wings to the heights of purest passion all day and night. If tomorrow will never come, we will use today as ransom... Plunge into the pool of immortality with me and let us re-invent reality. If hope is a flower, you are my garden; a bundle of blessing and not a burden. If faith is the colour of the Rainbow, your presence scares away every shadow.. If this is a poem, you are my indellible ink, the wellspring of words where worries sink. If friendship is the seed we could gather... We will in time and eternity be together.

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Date: 4/7/2014 6:15:00 PM
ADELEKE, , Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you:). ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/6/2014 12:40:00 PM
wow, you did an awesome job with this poem for a song that you may never have even heard of before, since it was written in the early 70's and done in the US. Big congrats. I loved reading your winning poem.
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Date: 4/6/2014 11:58:00 AM
I love the message in this beautiful couplet. What a inspiring work! Congratulations to you!!
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Date: 4/6/2014 9:54:00 AM
Beauty in positivity. well done. // congrats on win. // paul
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Date: 4/6/2014 7:38:00 AM
Congrats Adeleke on your deserved win my friend!!
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Date: 4/6/2014 4:25:00 AM
Beautifully written Adeleke... Well done! Verlena
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Date: 4/6/2014 1:42:00 AM
An absolutely beautiful pen, Adeleke! Big congrats on your accolade!!
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Date: 4/5/2014 11:41:00 PM
This is extremely amazing! Congratulations on your well-deserved great win my dear friend Adeleke. I like your poem so much! Thank u so much for sharing! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/5/2014 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, adeleke
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Date: 4/5/2014 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Adeleke for a lovely entry. Congrats....Seren
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Date: 4/4/2014 4:55:00 PM
Bravo! sounds like YOU are happy so great. Light & Love
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