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If the Crescent Moon

~

If the 
crescent 
moon smiles 
on you

then know 
that 
I am smiling 
too

and if per
chance 
it’s gone 
from view

then I will
send 
my smile
to you

~

good nightrhyme

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/3/2020 7:31:00 AM

So sweet, Chris! :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2020 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/1/2020 8:55:00 PM

Such a lovely poem, beautiful in it's simplicity and a joy to read! Keep up the great work Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2020 9:05:00 AM

Thank you Kelly, so nice to see you again.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/1/2020 12:32:00 PM

... and :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2020 9:05:00 AM

: ) Thank you Anne- Lise for the smile my friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/1/2020 9:35:00 AM

How comforting and very sweet.

Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2020 9:04:00 AM

Thank you Charmaine. I am happy you stopped by for a visit and enjoyed my poem so much. It is so nice to see you hanging around a bit more lately

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/31/2020 6:41:00 PM

It is gone from view here tonight , Chris....and your nice poem has brought it back with a smile. Thank you :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2020 9:02:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I am happy to hear that. I hope all of your evenings are filled with smiles

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/31/2020 6:40:00 PM

we won't have a moon in view here again tonight but i am sure your smile would outshine it any way if it's anything like your words... beautiful... have a great weekend my friend... sigh

Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2020 9:01:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. Your kind words always make my smile shine. I am happy you enjoyed this one