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If Stars Could Think

If stars could think. They would be thinking Dreadful thoughts. Wishing they could be humans. Just wishing that they could be Human. Lazily Lurking In a dark abyss. No where to go Nothing to do. Just hot stars in a dark Sky. Yet if they could only see. To us they shine brighter than all of our thoughts combined. Then they start to think extraordinary thoughts. They start to think People. Will gaze up at them for hours. So far, Yet So bright. But stars have nothing to fear. For they will outlive Us all.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2014 7:36:00 PM

Hi Ammon, I'm a little late:(. However, this is a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2014 12:46:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ammon - I choose your first very well written free verse - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olivia Struthers

Date: 11/6/2014 11:04:00 PM

I like how in the beginning of the poem it starts out sort of dark and then transforms into something entirely different. Fantastic job on your first poem!!! Welcome to Poetry Soup!