If She Was To Leave

if she was to leave, would a tear drop from my eye
would i just give her the keys, so away she could drive
i don't wanna push her away, but i don't wanna pull her in close
i don't know if i want her to stay, just that i don't want her to go
back forth my mind races, with what should I do 
and as time erases, im still stuck thinking of you
she says she loves me and automatically i say it too
hoping, praying if I say it enough then one day it may become true
are u the warmth i need, to heat my cold heart
or are u destined to leave, leaving me thawed in broken shards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Great write about the tossing of our inner emotions about truly giving of ourselves to another person..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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March 30, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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March 30, 2010 at 3:11 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jam. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Budd Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 12:54 PM
Heh. This is really heartbreaking. I see where you're coming from, makes total sense because it's confusing. Nice write.
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