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Poe and Catarina

Poe was always revising his prose between publications. Here are the longest extended versions of sentences he shortened for their final publication in his lifetime: "We loved each other with a love that was more than love, more love than fit in an empty grotes bag, more than the love of worms if you were a hungry, hungry catfish." "I became insane, with long intervals of sanity, then more insanity, then sane for a while, then my brain got all twisted up and went mad, then I got better. I've lost track." "All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream, within another dream, within a rusty tubular tin box of sewing needles made into the handle of a doll's hairbrush." "Believe only half of what you see, nothing of what you hear, three quarters of what you taste, one-tenth of what you feel, but the entirety of what you smell." "Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night, as for example bats, yes bats, did you know you could leave the cage door open in the bright of day and your bats will go nowhere." "Sleep, those little slices of death, how I loathe them, also the neighbor's nippy little dog, egads I hate that dog." "If you wish to forget anything on the Spot, make a note that this thing is to be remembered, then tie it to Spot's collar, and turn him loose in some terrible neighborhood where people eat dogs." "To elevate the soul, poetry is necessary, also those little candy root beer barrels." "I felt that I breathed an atmosphere of sorrow, but it was Catterina that farted." "I fell violently on my face, rolled to my side, grunted horrible grunts of gruntlyness, then flopped onto my back and waved my arms all about, still grunting." "Darkness and Decay and the Red Death held illimitable dominion over all, while Catterina licked her paws and I felt around in my pocket for my last dime but all I found was a raggedy little hole."

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Date: 5/27/2021 6:57:00 PM
I've read several of your poems tonight and your wit and humor shine through in each one. "Egads, root beer barrels."
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Date: 3/31/2021 8:05:00 PM
This is an incredibly accurate piece. It is as if Poe has come back to life.
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