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If only you were

That summer night air forgot to
breathe, I forgot something too.
Not sure what, but I remember
a star landed in the curved moon
—I saw it in the reflection
of my steaming apple tea

I remember wanting to
tell you, I witnessed a celestial love:
A lone star found her place
rested in the crescent’s embrace
I thought you’d love the story, a love
defying geography. I wondered
if you were seeing what I was, if
our gazes collided
above the thin cotton clouds. I giggled
thinking perhaps it’d count
as a date. I remember

I heard you, in the barely
flowing air, your voice a hushed ghost
I tried to keep you, so 
I put light between my fingers
In the wispy gray, you sounded
a little more present, defying
our past and our future—

The stale smoke 
smelt nothing like you, but I 
remember how it loomed around me
that night, and we watched 
In the reflection, 
moon and star, until
ripples swallow them into dark auburn

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Date: 8/16/2025 10:32:00 PM
Sch beautiful, haunting imagery in this lovely poem, Jasmine. Lovely, Gershon
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 8/16/2025 11:45:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Gershon!

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