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If Only You Knew

Heaven is your home now thank the good Lord If only you knew your roses have bloomed Our daughter trims them the way you adored Without such memories we'd both be doomed We had a picnic today just for you If only you knew the tears that were shed We ate your roast beef and bean salad too And never talked of the future we dread It has been a year since you went away If only you knew how slowly it passed Each night seems as if it has come to stay 'Til a new day without you dawns at last And so the world is smaller without you But, oh, you are loved - if only you knew 10-24-20 Contest : If Only You Knew Sponsor : Silent One

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Date: 10/27/2020 5:20:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2020 9:13:00 PM
Didn't mean to misspell your name, Caren..sorry!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2020 9:10:00 PM
Thank you, Karen
Date: 10/27/2020 8:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/1/2020 9:13:00 PM
Thank yopu!
Date: 10/26/2020 9:00:00 PM
The ache remains as memories unstained and yet we may choose to release to put the soul at ease that love eternal is Gods miracle, within. Congrats on your win!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/26/2020 9:04:00 PM
Well said and thank you.!!
Date: 10/26/2020 8:34:00 PM
A death can really bury deep inside the heart. The pain slowly , but surly passes, but their image and memory will always be there. Congratulations, Larry , on your win! Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/26/2020 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. She passed away during this pandemic when I could not visit in the hospital. So she had to do it alone and i doubt if I'll get over that.
Date: 10/26/2020 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/26/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, Mark
Date: 10/26/2020 12:54:00 PM
Hi Larry, What a moving and heartfelt write, expressing your thoughts (heart) to a loved one who’s no longer here. They live in on hearts and dreams. I’m sorry for your loss. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Have a wonderful day- Alexis
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/26/2020 1:24:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis
Date: 10/26/2020 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement..
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/26/2020 9:57:00 AM
Thank you

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