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If Only You Knew

If only you knew.. how much I love you, to the ends of the earth, you make my heart beat faster and faster. If only you knew.. how much I loved the sea, the water with many shades of blue, walking with the sand beneath my feet, cool breezes to sleep by. If only you knew.. how much I love beautiful flowers, pink roses are my very favorite, soft peddles that smell so heavenly. If only you knew.. how much I miss you, our talking, laughing and car rides, saying good by was hell on earth, If only you knew.. my thoughts and desires, you might be amazed with what you would find, if only you knew. Date Written:10/23/2020 3 Place If only you knew Contest Judged:10/26/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 11/4/2020 9:00:00 AM
Paula, your beautiful poem is filled with moving emotions and imagery. Your poetic pen shines! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/4/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. It is an honor to have a win. So glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day.................
Date: 10/28/2020 5:28:00 PM
So much unexpressed beauty in every word you pen, congratulations dear Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/30/2020 12:57:00 PM
Thanks, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day.................
Date: 10/27/2020 8:55:00 AM
- Lovely written, Paula :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2020 4:45:00 PM
Thanks, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day with hugs................
Date: 10/26/2020 9:12:00 PM
Congrats! :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thanks, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Have a wonderful day............
Date: 10/26/2020 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Paula , on your win! Hugs Eve
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2020 4:43:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day with hugs............
Date: 10/26/2020 5:26:00 PM
Back with Congrats on your win Darlene! Great job!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. So glad you like this one. It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day writing away...............
Date: 10/26/2020 1:08:00 PM
Hi Paula, Saying goodbye to a loved one is heartbreaking. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day- Alexis
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2020 4:41:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. So glad you like it. It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day.............
Date: 10/26/2020 9:22:00 AM
I think sometimes people really never know... Congratulations on your placement..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2020 4:40:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. So glad you like this one. I enjoyed writing it. It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day.............
Date: 10/26/2020 8:06:00 AM
If only you knew - this could be answered from so many perspectives, enjoyed your poem Paula. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thank You, for writing. So glad you like this one. Enjoy your day with a hug and blessings............
Date: 10/24/2020 1:04:00 PM
What a wonderful poem Darlene! It's always so hard to say goodbye. Well done! Have a beautiful day my friend!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/25/2020 11:17:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. So glad you like this one. You are so right. It can be very hard to say goodbye. Enjoy your day..........