If Only My Words I Could Take Back

The words passed through my lips,
Before my head had time to think.
The inflicted pain was not the intent;
If only my words I could take back.

Before my head had time to think
My emotions got the better of me.
If only my words I could take back;
Suffering in silence I would prefer.

My emotions got the better of me;
As sometimes they’re apt to do.
Suffering in silence I would prefer;
My immaturity shone through.

As sometimes they’re apt to do,
Words were spoken with a bitter sting.
My immaturity shone through;
It was with thoughtless ignorance.

Words were spoken with a bitter sting;
The inflicted pain was not the intent.
It was with thoughtless ignorance
The words passed through my lips.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:19 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you Joe for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 7:48 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on placing third. Caryl
Poet Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 12:27 PM
Yes ,full of wisdom!Congrats joe on your well deserved win---kashinath
Horsman Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 12:26 AM
profound and such sadness, yet beautiful, congrats on this excellent winner Joe. Harry
Mannan Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Many warm congrats for this win dear Joe.
Song Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 6:10 PM
This poem is full of wisdom...til this day I am probably suffering from hurtful words I have said in the past. Our tongues are the most powerful weapons of all. Congrats on your win. Gwendolen
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in Paula's Pantoum contest .. a vibrant write luv.. enjoy...
Fahey Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Oh my goodness! This has to be the most creative poem I have ever read. So cool the way the lines are placed and repeated! And it's called pantoum? I love it! Congrats on your win! So deserved! Ellen
Richards Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Each one of us knows exactly of which you speak here, in this insightful poem....How often do we wish we could rewind the moment and take back the words? Loved this!
Freeman Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 11:14 AM
An awesome job my man Joe, great to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy third place victory. Enjoy! Agape, Moses
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March 10, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Hello Joe, I dare say we have all said and or had someone else say things we wish were never said. This is a wonderful poem with a sincere message. As Always, Shar
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