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If Only I Could Hibernate

If only I could hibernate awaken in the spring z to see sweet swathes of snowdrops z /^/^\^\ }{ /^/^\^\ z VVVV VVVV ~ Welcome ~ z z sign z (as) s s p )_____( n r ) ( i i ^ g n e g ~~ b | | With daffodils and hyacinths and tulips on their way |~~And pretty blue forget-me-nots in gentle breeze shall dance and sway~~| |~~~~~The sun she rises higher in the cloudless bluest sky~~~~~| |~~~Great feelings of expectation with every passing day~~~| If only I could hibernate just like my tortoise Alfred the Great For Alfie has the best idea snuggling down this time of year Tummy full and time to sleep no winter chills or seasonal ills ** As I awaken to spring sunshine when all around is sparkling ** ***Birdsong t’will infuse the air*** There will be green shoots everywhere Melodious love songs birds shall sing to celebrate first day of spring So now as I retire to bed snuggling ‘neath my duvet Time for me to hibernate and sleep until that special date When sunshine takes the chill away I’ll open my eyes shouting hip hip hurray ‘tis time for me to celebrate my happy springtime birthday date Written 14th November 2020 Contest SHAPE UP Sponsor Brian Strand Copyright © Ann Gilmour | Year Posted 2020

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Date: 12/6/2020 4:52:00 PM
How delightful ~ what a fun poem, Ann ~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/9/2020 6:34:00 PM
Thank you Line, so glad you enjoyed it. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/1/2020 6:28:00 AM
Creative use of the shape idea. I do kind of hibernate in the winter months. I like the warmth of the house and comfort of a snuggly bed. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/2/2020 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Sara for your lovely compliments and I really appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/29/2020 9:20:00 PM
This is really a work of art. Well Done, Ann. Many congrats on your win. ~ Elaine
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/30/2020 12:27:00 PM
Oh bless you Elaine for your kind words and congrats. I really appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/29/2020 11:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Ann :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/30/2020 12:26:00 PM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise for your congratulations ~ I hope you are well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/24/2020 8:08:00 AM
There is lovely imagery in your shape poem, spring is still a few months away sadly...
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/25/2020 3:19:00 AM
Thank you SO for your generous comments my friend ~ yesterday I planted up several pots with spring bulbs and look forward to the explosion of colour on my balconies when spring finally arrives! It truly is my favourite time of year as I was born in March, so a spring lamb am I hahaha... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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