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If Only I Could Hibernate

If only I could hibernate To awaken in the spring To see sweet swathes of snowdrops A welcome sign as spring begins With daffodils and hyacinths And tulips on their way And pretty blue forget me nots In gentle breeze shall dance and sway The sun she rises higher in the cloudless bluest sky Great feelings of expectation with every passing day If only I could hibernate Just like my tortoise Alfred the Great For Alfie has the best idea Snuggling down this time of year Tummy full And time to sleep Not missing winter chills Or other seasonal ills I will awaken to spring sunshine When all around is sparkling Birdsong t'will infuse the air There will be green shoots everywhere Melodious love songs birds shall sing To celebrate first day of spring So now as I retire to bed Snuggling ‘neath my duvet Time for me to hibernate And sleep until that special date When sunshine takes the chill away I’ll open up my eyes and say hip hip hurray ~ it's spring today ‘tis time for me to celebrate my happy springtime birthday date
Written 14th November 2020

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Date: 11/22/2020 2:07:00 AM
lovely poem penned; enjoyable too imaginatively
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/22/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Mahtab for your lovely comments. so kind of you to visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/15/2020 6:47:00 AM
I love your stanza about Alfie. There's no true winter here yet, but spring will be a welcome sight. Linda
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/15/2020 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Linda, though Alfie is fictional, I am very fond of tortoises they are so incredibly prehistoric and they go at my speed, haha... Thank you for your lovely visit Linda ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/15/2020 3:41:00 AM
Ah yes. I love the warmth of thick covers. ~~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/15/2020 12:32:00 PM
yes they are so cosy at this time of year. Thank you Gordon. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/14/2020 7:09:00 PM
I also want to hunker down and hide as winter approaches. Is Alfred the tortoise real?
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/15/2020 12:30:00 PM
Sadly no, but I have always loved these prehistoric creatures, I love their gait and their handsome heads ~ oh I just love them... In the summer a couple brought their tortoise down to the public lawns by the sea and he was enjoying the freedom, in fact he got up to quite a speed. He was 30 years old. Thank for your comment Caren ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/14/2020 4:55:00 PM
We love to burrow into our covers. The warmth wraps us in possibilities of a dream.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/14/2020 5:57:00 PM
delightful comments dear Kim ~ I thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/14/2020 2:30:00 PM
I totally know that feeling. Great poem, Ann, I enjoy reading it :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/14/2020 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Akkina, how lovely to see you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/14/2020 1:02:00 PM
That was my wish from my earliest years and the reason I now live in Hawai'i! Well said! Aloha! Rico
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/14/2020 2:00:00 PM
room for one more??? thank you Rico for your most welcome visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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