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If Only I Could

If only I could pull the time each day I’d rather stretch, drag or expand in anyway Then, I can be more productive than I thought I can even start or finish my tomorrow’s work. If only I could pull the days each week Home and school work done, my joy at its peak I can render much time to all my sweethearts- Like loved ones, friends, music, poetry and arts. Yes, that’s if and only if I could do these two But time and days slip too fast, there’s nothing I can do I’ll just value each tick of the clock to the best I can Let each moment gauge my worth and strength as a woman. But If only I could transform into a fairy or magician I’ll cast my wand to lay instantly my day’s accomplished plans Like an abrupt rise of stocked hays in a farm or barn For everyone to play, roll and enjoy as we run around. April 20, 2023 13.31pm This or That, Vol 17 Poetry Contest By Edward Ibeh

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Valsa George

Date: 4/30/2023 11:43:00 PM

We can only wish to stretch the time to do things at our will. But we know it is not possible. The only way out is to make use of every second at hand. The gap between the longing and the reality is beautifully brought in, dear Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 5/2/2023 12:27:00 AM

You're right my dear poet friend. Thank you so much for reading my poem, your kind words and your loving support. May God bless you always and your writings, hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2023 10:08:00 AM

A wonderful write. I would be OK if I had 2 more days to each week. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away.............

Len Gasun
Date: 4/30/2023 7:17:00 AM

I think that could be better too, my dear poet friend. Thank you so much again for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away too. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2023 11:24:00 AM

- A wand would do a lot... tick tick... time flies, my friend :) - A lovely and sweet poem :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 4/30/2023 5:52:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your kind words and uplifting comments my dear poet friend Annelise. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs...