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If Only For Monte

If only tears could wash away the pain or fill the empty pit that sudden loss creates If that were true then this old heart would numb with overflowing This hole which resonates inside seems vast and never-ending At every turn, the memories are all that I can see If only tears could bring back just a blink of one more minute of one more touch and one more kiss you’d be here evermore But tears are only water filled of love and reminiscing And though a sweet release they can but only fill the sea For my sweet Monte 1/28/15 - 1/29 25

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Date: 2/2/2025 7:29:00 AM
Mike, such a heartfelt poem. Each line conveying your love and sorrow. Monte is waiting just over the rainbow bridge. One day he will hear your voice and come running to you. I am so glad that I got to meet Monte! I'm so sorry for your loss~ Warren
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/2/2025 8:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, I do believe that I will be with him again and forever, I miss my boy!
Date: 2/1/2025 8:07:00 AM
" . . . tears are only water filled with love"!! I was moved by the entire poem, but that line touched me so deeply, Mike. Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/1/2025 12:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice xxoo
Date: 1/31/2025 10:22:00 AM
Liliane, my dear wife, died almost nine years ago. So I can relate. Loss of anyone close can never be forgotten.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/31/2025 5:23:00 PM
I am so sorry Victor for your loss, thank you for your understanding!
Date: 1/31/2025 10:20:00 AM
aww Mike I am so sorry for your loss. what a wonderful tribute to Monte:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/31/2025 5:21:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much, your words mean alot xxoo
Date: 1/31/2025 5:38:00 AM
I know how you're feeling right now Mike, it's heartbreaking. I'm so sorry for your loss. All that's left are the happy memories that you have. A wonderful tribute from your heart Mike. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/31/2025 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Tom, I really appreciate your kind words!
Date: 1/31/2025 4:54:00 AM
Oh Mike l am so so sorry for your loss and sadness….you have written a very touching poem in honour of Monte! Again l am so sorry you are going through such a sorrowful time. Sending a huge cuddle to you my friend! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/31/2025 5:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Deb xxoo

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