If Only For a Little While

And she splashed in the waves
like she was twelve.
Though she was now sixty-nine.
The sun shone down on her grey head
as she yelled " the water is fine !".
But it wasn't fine, it was damned cold
and she didn't mind it a bit.
And after she swam she found a great log,
the perfect spot to just sit.

So many years were now behind her,
so few were left ahead.
But frolicking here in the ocean waves 
was the best of times she said.
The sun shone down and radiated 
almost as brightly as her smile,
making her feel almost young again
if only for a little while.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Gauthier Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:03 PM
I love the tone of your poem ~ beautiful ~ made me think of my belove Grand-mother. Added to my FAVE's
Manassian Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 11:13 PM
What a beautiful write. You draw the reader in to the timeless feel of freedom... where age isn't a factor. I enjoyed this write. Thanks for sharing
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