If Only For a Day

Serendipity came into play, when I stumbled upon a gallery,
I was a tourist in a seaside town, shopping midst a vast array
while blinding rays of sun’s reflection, caught my close propinquity
In one window, several seascapes, bucolic seaside scenes
but, one small painting called to me,..a harbinger of all my fantasies
I cupped my hands around my eyes...and that was when I sighed....
It took my breath, and I was kept a captive by the artist's pride...

A lovely landscape of a town, the village of my dreams 
This very street now, whence I stand, but from a different theme
Redolent of days erstwhile of scenes, from time quite long ago
Before the tourists trampled ground, and shopped for souvenirs
This village poised, beneath the hills...turned back two hundred years

Where cottage homes wore faded frames, on efflorescence sands 
demesne spreading wild and free, and skies were azure bands
Narrow lanes branched far away from roads that went astray
dipping down to petrichor dunes, where grasses bend in wind
A general store and a blacksmith shop, and summer never ends
Seagulls glide with angel wings, against the afternoon 
The peaceful lift that lives within, how wonderful it looms...

With a dalliance of my own epiphany, ..my thoughts are wild and free
how ephemeral it would be if I could freeze this day
If I could pull it out to see and visit it...again,
If I could bring it back when I am down, ...this peaceful afternoon...

Where leaves would never fall from trees, so ancient in their sway
And the gentle slopes would never know cruel storms of winter days
Where tears would never fall, again, and age, a timeless thing
If I could paralyze this town, the way it was back then
If time could be my captive prize.....if only for awhile…

I'd smile, if once I were allowed, a chance, to step inside




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3/15/16  For Contest: "A Day In A Town" Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron
Required Words Used:
1.Bucolic 2. Dalliance 3. Demesne 4. Efflorescence 5. Ephemeral 6. Epiphany 7. Erstwhile 8. Harbinger 9. Petrichor 10.Propinquity 11.Redolent 12. Serendipity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/30/2016 9:43:00 PM
This lad needed a dictionary. What an awesome picturesque narrative.
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Date: 4/27/2016 10:25:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "Day in town win. XOX *LINDA*
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Date: 4/15/2016 6:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win great poem x
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:34:00 AM
"Seagulls glide with angel wings, against the afternoon The peaceful lift that lives within, how wonderful it looms..." Oh Carrie, your words took my breath away! This is awesome and so deserving of your first place win my friend! Congratulations! #7 :)
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:15:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive write... Congratulations on your win..
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:04:00 PM
WOW, this is amazing. I just stuck to that rictameter form, but even if I had gone free like this, I never could have done one this fine. A very well deserved win, Carrie.
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations Ms Carrie on a fantastic win at a difficult challenge. A most enjoyable descriptive read. Peace nice lady:)
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:11:00 PM
So lovely, Carrie. congratulations on your win in the 'a day in a town' contest. Nicely done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/14/2016 2:19:00 PM
Beautiful painted scene wonderful place. Carrie, Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/14/2016 11:10:00 AM
Wonderful work Carrie! Congratulations for the win!!
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Date: 4/14/2016 12:29:00 AM
A great story Carrie. Your usual wonderful work. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/13/2016 9:48:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Day In A Town win. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/13/2016 7:36:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your well deserved win. You penned an excellent poem using all the words required.
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:49:00 AM
Carrie this is perfect for the contest. I am having a hard time thinking of ideas for this one. You wrote it superbly and good luck! -luloo :)
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