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If Only For a Day

Serendipity came into play, when I stumbled upon a gallery, I was a tourist in a seaside town, shopping midst a vast array while blinding rays of sun’s reflection, caught my close propinquity In one window, several seascapes, bucolic seaside scenes but, one small painting called to me,..a harbinger of all my fantasies I cupped my hands around my eyes...and that was when I sighed.... It took my breath, and I was kept a captive by the artist's pride... A lovely landscape of a town, the village of my dreams This very street now, whence I stand, but from a different theme Redolent of days erstwhile of scenes, from time quite long ago Before the tourists trampled ground, and shopped for souvenirs This village poised, beneath the hills...turned back two hundred years Where cottage homes wore faded frames, on efflorescence sands demesne spreading wild and free, and skies were azure bands Narrow lanes branched far away from roads that went astray dipping down to petrichor dunes, where grasses bend in wind A general store and a blacksmith shop, and summer never ends Seagulls glide with angel wings, against the afternoon The peaceful lift that lives within, how wonderful it looms... With a dalliance of my own epiphany, ..my thoughts are wild and free how ephemeral it would be if I could freeze this day If I could pull it out to see and visit it...again, If I could bring it back when I am down, ...this peaceful afternoon... Where leaves would never fall from trees, so ancient in their sway And the gentle slopes would never know cruel storms of winter days Where tears would never fall, again, and age, a timeless thing If I could paralyze this town, the way it was back then If time could be my captive prize.....if only for awhile… I'd smile, if once I were allowed, a chance, to step inside ___________________________________________________ 3/15/16 For Contest: "A Day In A Town" Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron Required Words Used: 1.Bucolic 2. Dalliance 3. Demesne 4. Efflorescence 5. Ephemeral 6. Epiphany 7. Erstwhile 8. Harbinger 9. Petrichor 10.Propinquity 11.Redolent 12. Serendipity

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Date: 5/30/2016 9:43:00 PM
This lad needed a dictionary. What an awesome picturesque narrative.
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Date: 4/27/2016 10:25:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "Day in town win. XOX *LINDA*
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Date: 4/15/2016 6:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win great poem x
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:34:00 AM
"Seagulls glide with angel wings, against the afternoon The peaceful lift that lives within, how wonderful it looms..." Oh Carrie, your words took my breath away! This is awesome and so deserving of your first place win my friend! Congratulations! #7 :)
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:15:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive write... Congratulations on your win..
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:04:00 PM
WOW, this is amazing. I just stuck to that rictameter form, but even if I had gone free like this, I never could have done one this fine. A very well deserved win, Carrie.
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations Ms Carrie on a fantastic win at a difficult challenge. A most enjoyable descriptive read. Peace nice lady:)
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:11:00 PM
So lovely, Carrie. congratulations on your win in the 'a day in a town' contest. Nicely done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/14/2016 2:19:00 PM
Beautiful painted scene wonderful place. Carrie, Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/14/2016 11:10:00 AM
Wonderful work Carrie! Congratulations for the win!!
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Date: 4/14/2016 12:29:00 AM
A great story Carrie. Your usual wonderful work. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/13/2016 9:48:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Day In A Town win. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/13/2016 7:36:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your well deserved win. You penned an excellent poem using all the words required.
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:49:00 AM
Carrie this is perfect for the contest. I am having a hard time thinking of ideas for this one. You wrote it superbly and good luck! -luloo :)
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