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Lipogram Contest by Emile Pinet ~ October 9, 2023

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"If only..."
How often I've whispered those two piddling words. Quietly, like the fluttering wings of hummingbirds, wishing I could rewind the clock to the time when we were together, more then just your best friend. Do you remember us, or did you choose to forget? Do you think of us with only remorse and regret? If I could rekindle our love like dew revives the flower, I'd be the loveliest bloom in the porticoed bower. If only I didn't feel the stinging misery of sorrow, I think we might find ourselves together tomorrow. Thrilled, I would be, being loved by you once more, with your ring on my finger, like I once proudly wore. If I could, I'd keep sullen nights from descending. Without you, they're overwhelming; never-ending. I refuse to look to the sky or the glowing moon. I'm not sure I ever will, but now it's much too soon. Could be it's better if we both try to forget, yet... "if only..."

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Date: 10/9/2023 10:02:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poem, I can feel every line. xoxoxo
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Date: 10/10/2023 6:41:00 AM
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Date: 10/9/2023 10:02:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poem, I can feel every line. xoxoxo
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Date: 10/10/2023 6:40:00 AM
Thank you for such gentle thoughts, Aurore.
Date: 10/9/2023 1:07:00 PM
"If  Only" 2 very powerful words for a powerful write/picture. Good Luck...  Have a wonderful day writing away.................
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Date: 10/9/2023 1:17:00 PM
Thank you for such kind thoughts, as always, Paula.
Date: 10/9/2023 10:41:00 AM
A very sentimental poem with love and imagery,
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Date: 10/9/2023 1:17:00 PM
Twas that, Jay. Thanks you.
Date: 10/9/2023 8:22:00 AM
I feel the pain of regret in this lovely collaborative poem. "The stinging misery of sorrow" struck a chord with me. A powerful poem with beautiful imagery. A fav.
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Date: 10/9/2023 8:43:00 AM
You always 'get' me, Sara. That kind of perception is appreciated. Thank you.
Date: 10/9/2023 5:01:00 AM
The sounds of regret. I didn't know "portico", but do now. Only if... Thanks Lin
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Date: 10/9/2023 5:03:00 AM
My thanks always reflects on your comments, Jeff. ;-)

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