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Lipogram Contest by Emile Pinet ~ October 9, 2023

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If Only

"If only..."
How often I've whispered those two piddling words. Quietly, like the fluttering wings of hummingbirds, wishing I could rewind the clock to the time when we were together, more then just your best friend. Do you remember us, or did you choose to forget? Do you think of us with only remorse and regret? If I could rekindle our love like dew revives the flower, I'd be the loveliest bloom in the porticoed bower. If only I didn't feel the stinging misery of sorrow, I think we might find ourselves together tomorrow. Thrilled, I would be, being loved by you once more, with your ring on my finger, like I once proudly wore. If I could, I'd keep sullen nights from descending. Without you, they're overwhelming; never-ending. I refuse to look to the sky or the glowing moon. I'm not sure I ever will, but now it's much too soon. Could be it's better if we both try to forget, yet... "if only..."
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Severo Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 10:02 PM
This is a very beautiful poem, I can feel every line. xoxoxo
Lane Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:41 AM
;-)
Severo Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 10:02 PM
This is a very beautiful poem, I can feel every line. xoxoxo
Lane Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Thank you for such gentle thoughts, Aurore.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 1:07 PM
"If  Only" 2 very powerful words for a powerful write/picture. Good Luck...  Have a wonderful day writing away.................
Lane Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Thank you for such kind thoughts, as always, Paula.
Narain Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 10:41 AM
A very sentimental poem with love and imagery,
Lane Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Twas that, Jay. Thanks you.
Connelly Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 5:01 AM
The sounds of regret. I didn't know "portico", but do now. Only if... Thanks Lin
Lane Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 5:03 AM
My thanks always reflects on your comments, Jeff. ;-)
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