Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

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      . . gravity were graceful, giving and gracious

                 like space, lace and liquid love,

 

              each puzzling piece would fit for us,

      and time would trace the importance thereof -

 

       unlike the unlimited heaviness that pulls at me,

          i’m holding onto the hope of,        if only . . .

 

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A simple, yet symbolic scribble

~ As tender thoughts tug ‘pon my heart ~

 

Bite Size Poem no.45 Poetry Contest

          Sponsor- Line Gauthier

                   2nd Place

 

Sunday June 5th, 2022- Poem of the Week

If Only

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      . . gravity were graceful, giving and gracious
                   like space, lace and liquid love,
     
            each puzzling piece would fit for us,
    and time would trace the importance thereof - 

       unlike the unlimited heaviness that pulls at me,
             i’m holding onto the hope of,     if only . . .


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A simple, yet symbolic scribble
~ As tender thoughts tug ‘pon my heart ~ 



Bite Size Poem no.45 Poetry Contest
         Sponsor- Line Gauthier
                  2nd Place

Sunday June 5th, 2022- Poem of the Week

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David Scott July 20, 2026 at 4:53 PM Wicked lo e it the last line hits home for me yrs if only though something we do ask our selfs alot love the ryhme pattern beaitifulxx Brandy Nicole July 20, 2026 at 7:23 PM I understand, because words have a way of touching the heart in many ways. We've all been through difficult or trying times in our lives. Thank you David, for sharing your kind thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy

The Situation July 25, 2023 at 7:09 PM It speaks. And we do say "Only if" the format gives us discriptions which do beckon "what if" Brandy Nicole July 26, 2023 at 6:24 PM Simple, yet powerful emotions from the heart. Those two words often linger as well, "what, if." As the poem states, "if only-" meaning; I wish I knew. Thank you TS, for your lovely comment. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Paige Hind March 8, 2023 at 11:39 AM Real, raw, ready poetry!!! :D Loved it. Brandy Nicole March 8, 2023 at 7:26 PM Thank you, Paige. So many emotions tangle within. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Jared Pickett January 21, 2023 at 12:45 AM Elegant!! I must admit, that opening had my mind sent to a dirty place (not a bad thing because I reside there most of the time) "Space, lace and liquid love" Very good! Much love Asavvy1 Brandy Nicole January 21, 2023 at 11:41 AM Smiling at you. I can understand that thought taking you to a naughty place, after reading your poetry. I appreciate your lovely comment. "if only," are two words, but they can say so much. Just like in this poem. Thank you, Jared. My best to you. :) Brandy

Carl Rankin December 27, 2022 at 8:30 AM Short sweet and elegant very nice. Brandy Nicole December 27, 2022 at 8:50 AM Thank you, Carl. Sometimes less is more, when speaking from the heart. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Line Gauthier October 26, 2022 at 7:20 AM lovely ~ Brandy Nicole October 28, 2022 at 6:30 PM Thank you, Line. Your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos August 19, 2022 at 11:03 PM A thought provoking write , a little abstract like a brilliant painting. i see you got poem of the week, very deservedly so Brandy, Congratulations, you are such a loyal friend and very popular on soup, I can see why, its your nature and gentleness. I do read alot of your poems but somewhere somehow you might have read that we still have our 32 year old Personnel Consultancy going which demands my time. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer. Brandy Nicole August 20, 2022 at 6:57 PM Jennifer, such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate you, your kind words and congratulations. I'm just a simple woman that writes from the heart. Thank you for being here, for being you. I completely understand, my dear friend. Take as much time as you need. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Komal Walimbe August 12, 2022 at 11:57 PM Beautifully written! If only problems had easy solutions! A great write...wonderfully penned. Brandy Nicole August 13, 2022 at 3:55 PM Dear Komal, your kind words are greatly appreciated. I completely agree, my dear sweet friend. In the meantime, I'm holding onto hope and counting my blessings. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eve Roper August 3, 2022 at 7:00 PM If only. Each puzzle piece would fit. In woven lace and liquid love. Stunning, girl, just stunning. Blessing my girl Brandy Nicole August 4, 2022 at 11:57 AM Some pieces don't fit, which leaves the heart feeling lost. However, I count my blessings with those that do fit. Your kind words mean so much to me. Thank you, Eve. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Robert Gorelick July 17, 2022 at 8:05 PM It would be splendid to at least on occasion break the oppressive shackles of gravities harsh pull! Enjoyed tremendously Brandy Brandy Nicole July 18, 2022 at 6:20 PM Yes, I completely agree with your thoughts Robert. The weight is becoming unbearable. I'm pulling those shackles away, every chance I get. Thank you, Robert. Such a wonderful thing to say. My best to you. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues July 11, 2022 at 7:57 AM Very nice, Brandy! Brandy Nicole July 11, 2022 at 8:50 PM Thank you, Kim. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Supraja Kannan July 5, 2022 at 6:20 AM So beautifully written... Such an unique piece... Brandy Nicole July 5, 2022 at 12:59 PM Thank you, Supraja. I appreciate your lovely comment and compliment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Michael Tor July 3, 2022 at 7:06 PM Nicely written Brandy. Such an emotional piece. Truly enjoyed reading. Blessings your way Dear... Brandy Nicole July 3, 2022 at 8:15 PM Thank you, Michael. Even though deep emotions flood my soul, hope shines through. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Silpika Kalita July 3, 2022 at 2:21 PM So creatively creative with rich similes.. belated congratulations on deserving POTD Brandy Nicole July 3, 2022 at 5:42 PM Thank you, Silpika. Tender thoughts from the heart caress the page. I appreciate your kindness and congratulations. My best to you. :) Brandy

Daisy Meadows June 30, 2022 at 12:00 AM This is a lovely poem. Well done. Brandy Nicole June 30, 2022 at 7:59 PM Thank you, Jeanette. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Mystic Rose Rose June 29, 2022 at 3:52 PM Your words are fluid and beautiful in this amazing poem, thank you for sharing, love and light Vie Brandy Nicole June 29, 2022 at 6:37 PM Such a beautiful comment and compliment. Thank you, Vie. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Ashley June 28, 2022 at 7:21 PM Dearest Brandy, you have such a beautiful gift for weaving emotional contemplations with potent delicacy. My heart's imagination can't help but melt into your moving imagery. Your poem is light and airy yet so full of yearning.. if only.. evokes such bittersweet tenderness. Belated congratulations for well deserved POTW honors, my sweet friend. You are such an amazing poetess and I revel in your ethereal artistry. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan Brandy Nicole June 29, 2022 at 12:32 PM Dear Susan, high praise from you leaves me in complete awe. (You) have such a talented pen, my sweet friend. I am just a simple woman writing from the depth of my heart. I'm curling your lovely thoughts softly around me. You have such a way with words that even (Your comment is poetic and graceful). Thank you for your kind words and congratulations. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

FJ Thomas June 26, 2022 at 12:19 PM This one tugs at the heart of many Brandy. Perfectly touching in its brevity :) Brandy Nicole June 26, 2022 at 8:55 PM Yes, in many ways. Thank you FJ, Thomas. I appreciate your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Regina Mcintosh June 21, 2022 at 4:53 PM Beautifully done... Do you write code because it seems like you do from your posts? I graduated from a Web design program but haven't used code in such a long time. I've probably forgotten more than I remember. Love you write. God bless you, Love, Gina Brandy Nicole June 21, 2022 at 7:31 PM Thank you. No, I don't write code. I'm simply using a word program to enhance my writing. That's amazing. I had no idea that you knew about code. I'm sure if you got back to it, you would remember. I appreciate you Regina, and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

I Am Anaya June 21, 2022 at 12:25 PM Brandy may your {if only's} be answered and your spirit be lifted high above all the weightiness, and flow blithe and serene. Best Wishes, Anaya Brandy Nicole June 21, 2022 at 7:28 PM Thank you, Anaya. Very inspiring are your thoughts, which brings tender and uplifting moments. My heart is smiling. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sam Kauffman June 21, 2022 at 12:09 PM Brandy, congratulations on being at the top of the BNP's! Living on hope, on the "if only," beautifully expressed my friend. How I wish someone could put hope into a capsule that we could take every morning. But, then we wouldn't have need for wonderful poems like this to inspire us. Wonderful work! Sending you blessings on the wings of hope! Brandy Nicole June 21, 2022 at 7:16 PM Dear Sam, thank you noticing the placement of my scribble. I'm still in disbelief. Such a wonderful thing to say. I wish this were possible, my dear friend. The world would be a much better place indeed. My thoughts are simple and from the heart. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. I'm drifting on those "wings of hope". My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Frederic Parker June 20, 2022 at 4:02 PM this poem is filled with the deep musings of wisdom, dear poet Brandy Nicole June 21, 2022 at 7:05 PM I'm humbled by your comment. Thank you, Fredric. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2022 at 4:27 PM Also I see it was a POTW? Wow, Congrats for that. Brandy Nicole June 18, 2022 at 6:54 PM Thank you Andrea, for your kind words and congratulations. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2022 at 4:27 PM Fantastic bite sized poem. I hope Line loves it. Brandy Nicole June 18, 2022 at 6:55 PM Thank you, Andrea. Line liked this. I received second place in the contest. :) Hugs, Brandy

Harry Horsman June 14, 2022 at 10:32 PM Wow, so deserving POTW Brandy, with this exquisite poetry. Brandy Nicole June 15, 2022 at 6:53 PM I'm still in complete awe. Thank you, Harry. You and your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

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