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If Only

If only i could make you smile even for just a little while my life would be complete... If I could walk through all your trials calm you when your feelin riled my life would be complete.... If I could bring you happiness make your life a sweet success my life would be complete.... If I could hold you tenderly dry each tear so gingerly my life would be complete.... If you could love me just a while eternity would record the smile of a life that was complete....

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Date: 12/25/2019 11:01:00 AM
Lovely poem, Running Wolves. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/25/2019 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Merry Christmas and best wishes to you and yours as well.
Date: 12/21/2019 11:48:00 AM
This is beautiful! It hits home....I love your style! Hugs, Ingrid
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/21/2019 3:19:00 PM
Thank you very kindly
Date: 12/19/2019 9:03:00 PM
Ah, even to have been loved that little bit. You write too deeply.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/20/2019 6:12:00 AM
Well I don't know about deep, but I thank you.
Date: 12/8/2019 2:39:00 PM
wonderful little poem, Robert.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/8/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you dear poetess
Date: 12/6/2019 11:34:00 PM
You have placed your heart upon the page. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Dreams can become- reality. ~ Brandy
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Date: 12/6/2019 11:36:00 PM
I thank you most sincerely
Date: 12/6/2019 10:30:00 AM
beautiful Robert...if only...says so much in itself...makes the desires felt...
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/6/2019 11:47:00 AM
Thank you dear poetess. Hugs :-)

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