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If Not Now

life barely a spark in time flashed past brief memories soon forgotten promises made to ourselves loves the world still unfilled new year’s resolutions barely edited from year to year promises that take a moment to make a lifetime to honour as the inevitable end at accelerating pace draws to a slow or painful abrupt cessation promises? if not now, when?

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Date: 7/19/2021 8:24:00 PM
Hi Mel, This poem works for me because of the way it strings together images creating a kind of river of words. This poem has the look and feel of Beat Poetry. Based on the date of this post, it has been a long while since you have given us the benefit of seeing your work. I hope you post something soon. Best, Thomas
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Date: 11/11/2019 3:49:00 AM
Nice one... Bless you dear friend, Gina
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Date: 11/10/2019 3:54:00 PM
a sad ending and i guess that is something a lot of us fear..
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Date: 11/10/2019 7:17:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Mel. Love this form.
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