If My Life Was Upside Down

if my life was upside down i'd bump my head against the ground i'd trip over ceiling fans and i'd shake feet insted of hands i wouldnt keep any pocket change but i would keep a blood rushed brain every smile would be a frown living life upside down life upside down would be a mess confusing your right from my left people would say bottoms up but if i did i would spill my cup it sure would be funny when friends came around they wouldn't ask whats up? they would sarcastically ask whats down for those of you.....who wake up in bed in the morning when i wake,.... i wake down insted people always tell me to keep my head up high i look at them with resentment and walk away and sigh pictures never seem to stay when i hang them on the wall being upside down they always seem to fall i always have a hard time writing what i say and when i use my pen the ink flows the other way its funny how people complain about how life keeps them down but they haven't experienced living life upside down

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Date: 8/14/2011 1:46:00 PM
a very intelligent write, liked alot can soo relate :)
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:01:00 PM
I love this piece....very true!
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:50:00 AM
Glad you finished this. Loved it. Made me laugh :) Keep up the good work. Em
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Date: 3/1/2011 2:09:00 PM
This is so clever and creative, John. Hope you add some more verses. You gave me a great laugh! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:23:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup John. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2011 9:03:00 AM
Looking forward to reading the rest of this! Em
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