If My Four Walls Could Talk

If the four walls could talk
My o my what they could say
they saw my tears fall down my face
they heard my screams 
when I exactly stopped growing  
If I am truly happy or sad
If your four walls could talk
what would they say
would you change what you do in front of them?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lewis Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 3:16 AM
very nice, i enjoyed it... from one lewis to the other
Brown Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 11:35 AM
I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Patricia. Love, Carol
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March 23, 2012 at 10:33 AM
Beautifully written :) makes me wonder Wat my walls would say .. -edwaard
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