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If Love Were Just a Number

If love were just a number then I must be that number that falls right after infinity ends and just before completeness emerges from the other side of time there are times I feel as if I live on a street with no doors….. because no one knocks as if I am sequestered in a space with no windows…… for I have become invisible to those others who want or need to be wanted my reflection no longer warrants even a shadow of it’s own my belief that there can be more simply a yearning to keep the coldness of loneliness from submerging my heartbeat into particles of ice hope the eternal pacifier that we are not truly alone would someone else cannot find me could I find myself...ever if love were just a number Irish

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Date: 5/6/2010 5:42:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem. Nice write
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:30:00 PM
SOMETHING NEW AND SOMETHING GOOD, ENJOYED THIS WRITE
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Date: 5/6/2010 2:26:00 PM
Amazing rendition of what it feels like to be lonely, isolated. But with all your travels, I hope you are having some opportunities to socialize. Well done, Michael, and it's nice to see "Irish" posting again. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/6/2010 2:25:00 PM
I especially like the way that you composed lines six forward....Great metaphoric language used to express feelings...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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