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If Looks Could Kill

somewhat a surprise
comfort  now my weary eye's
make me forget time

eye's across the room
come into my hungry view
my eye's are feasting

eye's follow their prey
betting their chances what may
devour love one day

Copyright © John Loving Iii | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/5/2012 7:49:00 PM SOme folks around me would not be today.. if they could kill... xox~PD Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 2/13/2012 8:41:00 PM Happy Valentine's Day John. Enjoyed reading your poem and I am falling behind in my reading,will try and catch up. Hope all is well with you. love phyl Login to Reply

Lizzie Treetop Date: 2/7/2012 2:28:00 AM Personally me thougth it twas the poets eyes that were doing the feasting but then I have been known to be wrong! who knows, seems to me the feast might be worth persuing! Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 2/5/2012 3:34:00 AM These are very well written, enjoyed. harry Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 2/2/2012 11:35:00 AM Soup Mail..Urgent! Login to Reply

Jancarl Campi Date: 2/2/2012 2:25:00 AM hmmm? a very interesting poem. she sounds a bit scary. i would stay away, far away, far,far away. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Jancarl Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/1/2012 9:44:00 PM John,,,, once again... I end my day with your poem.. and if looks could kill... everyone around me would be...ummm.. not gonna finish that sentence.. lol.. glad I hopped on over... have a good night..always..;-)pd Login to Reply

Taylor Thompson Date: 2/1/2012 6:35:00 PM And it will happen. Love the longing in this. Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 2/1/2012 3:18:00 PM the eyes have it...I saw your comment (someone left his calling card on it) glad my words gave you such pleasure...when is the super bowl? I'll try to be there, but it depends...on circumstances...and if I'm in the souper bowl :-) captcha says 'ment' that means this is meant for you and you alone... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/1/2012 2:53:00 PM Looks can kill if the looks follow evil thoughts in one's mind..Sad isn't it..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work about "The Walton's"..Is that what men do when they go out and about feasting on unsuspecting women??...Sara Login to Reply