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If Looks Could Kill

somewhat a surprise
comfort  now my weary eye's
make me forget time

eye's across the room
come into my hungry view
my eye's are feasting

eye's follow their prey
betting their chances what may
devour love one day

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Poet Destroyer A

July 5, 2012 at 7:49 PM

SOme folks around me would not be today.. if they could kill... xox~PD

Phyllis Babcock

February 13, 2012 at 8:41 PM

Happy Valentine's Day John. Enjoyed reading your poem and I am falling behind in my reading,will try and catch up. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Lizzie Treetop

February 7, 2012 at 2:28 AM

Personally me thougth it twas the poets eyes that were doing the feasting but then I have been known to be wrong! who knows, seems to me the feast might be worth persuing!

Harry Horsman

February 5, 2012 at 3:34 AM

These are very well written, enjoyed. harry

Dan Kearley

February 2, 2012 at 11:35 AM

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Jancarl Campi

February 2, 2012 at 2:25 AM

hmmm? a very interesting poem. she sounds a bit scary. i would stay away, far away, far,far away. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Jancarl

Poet Destroyer A

February 1, 2012 at 9:44 PM

John,,,, once again... I end my day with your poem.. and if looks could kill... everyone around me would be...ummm.. not gonna finish that sentence.. lol.. glad I hopped on over... have a good night..always..;-)pd

Taylor Thompson

February 1, 2012 at 6:35 PM

And it will happen. Love the longing in this.

Charlotte Puddifoot

February 1, 2012 at 3:18 PM

the eyes have it...I saw your comment (someone left his calling card on it) glad my words gave you such pleasure...when is the super bowl? I'll try to be there, but it depends...on circumstances...and if I'm in the souper bowl :-) captcha says 'ment' that means this is meant for you and you alone...

Sara Kendrick

February 1, 2012 at 2:53 PM

Looks can kill if the looks follow evil thoughts in one's mind..Sad isn't it..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work about "The Walton's"..Is that what men do when they go out and about feasting on unsuspecting women??...Sara

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