If life’s a loan lent in good trust

If life’s a loan lent in good faith and trust,                      
Ye pay the debt with frivolous trinkets 
Or wait till you are one with graveyard dust. 
Destiny’s not one to forget the debts, 
Help therefore distressed souls as if ye must, 
Love those that lost out on their lifelong bets. 
Share with those in wants with hope at your door,  
Whenever pass by have-nots’ laid-bare huts,  
You may not cross again this needy shore, 
Remember, true help’s rendered, ifs nor buts,  
To those stuck up at their life’s lower floor, 
So, pay in one swell shot, no cautious putts.  
    Life’s lent gratuitous not, make good God’s trust 
    Here and now, ere done art thou to grave’s dust. 
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 Sonnet | 09.12.2004 | debt, life, loan, philosophy, trust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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November 4, 2025 at 11:47 PM
...Destiny’s not one to forget the debts... I really like your profound poem, Sir. Its depth and timeless message truly resonate.
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