If It's Too Loud

Each past, an echo not our own,
 worshipped as the most and best.
It's a crowded cemetery, yet alone
 we lie when put to the test.

Canyons carved by a vanished rain
 will also crumble under their own weight.
Every bend records the strain
 of water passing through this date.

Sifting the ashes of a dead fire
 where warmth no longer exists.
The remains no longer inspire
 as nostalgia grows and persists.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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