If it's broke don't fix it

Devoted to imperfections like rituals ~ 
they make my tiny hook break unusual.

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Date: 12/8/2023 12:11:00 PM
Brilliant one liner “ devoted to imperfections like rituals “ yes why not. One must be proud to flaunt all shades of their feathers, and be loyal to their imperfections because that’s exactly what makes them stand out from the rest. “ they make my tiny hook break unusual” true! It makes you unique special, always stay real. Pleasure reading this deeply meaningful line. Sending you light always
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Tonye George
Date: 12/8/2023 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Ink for your wonderful comment, pleasure having you here.
Date: 12/7/2023 7:57:00 AM
Oh my, this is such a brilliant couplet which conveys so much depth.. What's broken can't be fixed the same as it was earlier, their are still the memories of cracks.. "Devoted to imperfections", "they make my tiny hook break unusual" Woah, this is so thought-provoking..
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Tonye George
Date: 12/7/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Hiya for your positive comment.
Date: 12/7/2023 6:47:00 AM
Nice twist on the old saying. Imperfections are ... us
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Tonye George
Date: 12/7/2023 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Indeed we are the definition of it.
Date: 12/7/2023 6:39:00 AM
Yes very true... yet people still try to fix that which is not broken..
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Tonye George
Date: 12/7/2023 6:42:00 AM
Yes. And if it's not broken sometimes we should break it, lol. Thank you for your support, it motivates me.
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