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If it's broke don't fix it

Devoted to imperfections like rituals ~ 
they make my tiny hook break unusual.

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Ink Empress

December 8, 2023 at 12:11 PM

Brilliant one liner “ devoted to imperfections like rituals “ yes why not. One must be proud to flaunt all shades of their feathers, and be loyal to their imperfections because that’s exactly what makes them stand out from the rest. “ they make my tiny hook break unusual” true! It makes you unique special, always stay real. Pleasure reading this deeply meaningful line. Sending you light always

Tonye George

December 8, 2023 at 2:54 PM

Thank you Ink for your wonderful comment, pleasure having you here.

Hiya Sharma

December 7, 2023 at 7:57 AM

Oh my, this is such a brilliant couplet which conveys so much depth.. What's broken can't be fixed the same as it was earlier, their are still the memories of cracks.. "Devoted to imperfections", "they make my tiny hook break unusual" Woah, this is so thought-provoking..

Tonye George

December 7, 2023 at 9:29 AM

Thank you Hiya for your positive comment.