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If I Were Your Love

If I were your love, Will you love me till I’m grey-haired? If I were your love, Will you stay with me till evening tide? When you see me inside out, Will you still stay close? When the unfamiliar is unveiled, Will you build a wall to part us? If I were your love, Will our love trestle us across the seas? In the journey of hearts, Will our love become threadbare? If I were your love, Will the love survive the unseen? Oh, when gloom permeates, Will our love light its way through? May 2, 2023.

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Date: 5/2/2023 6:57:00 AM
so touching questionning about love, thanks for sharing
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Date: 5/2/2023 6:34:00 AM
Tough prompt! Love can do many things but it can not predict the future. Enjoyed my read, Thompson.
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Date: 5/4/2023 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I'm honoured.

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