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If I Were Your Love

I was delighted to hear the birds sing as the breeze blew across the sunburst sky flushing your face in hue. How adorable you were to me I could have shown, if I were your love you would have known. After the morose night in your garden I found me, sparkled brightly like the blooming flower of ecstasy. On your luring rose as a drop of dew I could have grown, if I were your love you would have known. From the eternity I borrowed the time we shared, like the blazing sunset sky my yearning in reverie flared. How keen I was to see the day on dream I had flown, if I were your love you would have known. In the blue firmament of your eyes my fervor flew to the charming nest I had built for us new. How fondly I sheltered my desire as the storm had blown, if I were your love you would have known. Your voice created music in the silence of longing, filled with melody the void of my lonesome being. How complete I could become as you made me your own, if I were your love you would have known. When drifting on the trail of melting mirage you left, like the dry sands of caved-in dune I felt deserted bereft. I could hear how sadly my unsaid words ‘I need you’ moan, if I were your love you would have known. When your essence remained as a shadow within me, fused with the darkness of abyss in my feeling I could see. How many candles I had lighted there for you alone, if I were your love you would have known.

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Date: 5/4/2023 9:31:00 PM
Wow. Nice imagery and beautiful verses, Congrats on your win Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jay for your visit and nice comment.
Date: 5/3/2023 7:11:00 AM
Oh my Subimal. This soulful write is filled with your beautiful imagery and pours forth from your heart. Congratulations on you win! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:33:00 PM
Thank you, Linda for your appreciative comments.
Date: 5/3/2023 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A splendid poem. The images are sparkling!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:32:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comments.
Date: 5/3/2023 12:23:00 AM
This is superb, Subimal, I am gonna fave this one:) congratulations:)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2023 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna for liking the poem.

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