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If I Were Water

I am water Dripping down your height, I am color I shall that turn neither black nor white, I am a rage Screaming through cold teeth, I am passion Hide me away and I’ll burn down your life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/15/2010 5:54:00 AM
Wow. This is such a strong write. Your emotions seep right through it like pure water. Thank you for this quenching poem. :) Once again I have to thank you for your comments, they have been such a great motivation. Love, Maya
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Date: 11/30/2008 2:15:00 PM
Neat construction and marvelous word use... strong emotion... enigmatic! Best wishes, Keith
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