Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

If I Were Immortal

Immortality in a physical world
Will be definitely hard ‘though impossible
It’s only on movies as fantasy unfurls
Such as war robots or zombies in curse
Or scary ghost where our breath gets hold.

Immortality in a physical world
Will surely be an everlasting anguish
Getting older or weaker…death be our wish
Forever young makes us probably childish
Unimaginable earth’s life, I think it would.

But if I were immortal in this world
I would be at war zones, a brave soldier
Catching bombs and missiles to save people
Draining enemies’ armory, so simple
Like terminator movies where strengths unfold.

But there’s no other immortality in this world
Than God’s words feeding eternally our soul
If we live in God’s words, listen and obey His call
We’ll inherit Heaven's Kingdom, His immortality is whole
For our eternal life is only in Jesus, our Savior-Lord. 


May 1,2022      9.03am


Ecclessiates 12:7
And the dust returns to the earth as it was, and the spirit returns to God who gave it


If I Were Immortal
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Joe Maverick May 3, 2022 at 1:19 PM Amen and amen ' Len Gasun May 4, 2022 at 6:38 PM Hello my dear friend Jo! Thanks a lot for dropping by again to read my poem and your support. God bless you my dear friend. Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong May 2, 2022 at 12:53 AM It is everything to know that our souls are immortal. I certainly wouldn’t want to live in a body that lived as long as Noah. Wonderfully expressed. Blessings xxoo Len Gasun May 2, 2022 at 9:23 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your kind words my dear friend, Connie. God bless you and your family always. Hugs

Valsa George May 1, 2022 at 10:18 PM Beautifully said Len . Immortality in this world will be a curse. We will reach a point of satiety when we begin to experience boredom and loneliness and reach a state when we prefer death to immortality. Immortality becomes enjoyable only with our God Len Gasun May 2, 2022 at 9:24 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your kind words my dear friend, Valsa. God bless you and your family always. Hugs