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If I Were Immortal

Immortality in a physical world Will be definitely hard ‘though impossible It’s only on movies as fantasy unfurls Such as war robots or zombies in curse Or scary ghost where our breath gets hold. Immortality in a physical world Will surely be an everlasting anguish Getting older or weaker…death be our wish Forever young makes us probably childish Unimaginable earth’s life, I think it would. But if I were immortal in this world I would be at war zones, a brave soldier Catching bombs and missiles to save people Draining enemies’ armory, so simple Like terminator movies where strengths unfold. But there’s no other immortality in this world Than God’s words feeding eternally our soul If we live in God’s words, listen and obey His call We’ll inherit Heaven's Kingdom, His immortality is whole For our eternal life is only in Jesus, our Savior-Lord. May 1,2022 9.03am
Ecclessiates 12:7 And the dust returns to the earth as it was, and the spirit returns to God who gave it If I Were Immortal Contest Judged: 5/2/2022 6:12:00 AM Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Place 3

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Date: 5/3/2022 1:19:00 PM
Amen and amen '
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/4/2022 6:38:00 PM
Hello my dear friend Jo! Thanks a lot for dropping by again to read my poem and your support. God bless you my dear friend. Hugs
Date: 5/2/2022 12:53:00 AM
It is everything to know that our souls are immortal. I certainly wouldn’t want to live in a body that lived as long as Noah. Wonderfully expressed. Blessings xxoo
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/2/2022 9:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your kind words my dear friend, Connie. God bless you and your family always. Hugs
Date: 5/1/2022 10:18:00 PM
Beautifully said Len . Immortality in this world will be a curse. We will reach a point of satiety when we begin to experience boredom and loneliness and reach a state when we prefer death to immortality. Immortality becomes enjoyable only with our God
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/2/2022 9:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your kind words my dear friend, Valsa. God bless you and your family always. Hugs

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