If I Were Gone

If you were never again to see me, 
Left to live alone in question, 
Deprived of whom you cared for endlessly, 
Would you live in hesitation? 
Forever to reproach of my deliverance, 
Meanwhile wandering through a dark forest 
Searching for just a single sign of my existence, 
Praying that I have not been put to rest. 
If you open your eyes
You will see that I have not, 
But have instead been awoken. 
So the matter at hand 
As you watch the break of dawn, 
Remember that it is a request not a demand. 
I would not want you to give up on life, if I were gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bailey Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 6:00 AM
This is a very touching and well put together piece Jacob. I love it. Regards "B"
Frey Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 3:13 PM
thank you very much
Fraser Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 8:50 PM
I like how you so humbly make your request to the one who loves you and give them permission to move on. Very unselfish my friend. nicely done, Blessings Carl
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November 25, 2014 at 9:02 PM
thank you the way i see it i they don't move on they will never be the same
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