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If I Were a Tree

Sky overhead, ground below, stance erect Roots with brethren entwined, in the forest Sequoia redwood tall, with roots far spread United we all stand, being well bred Helping each other, judging not merit Immune to disease, though no one suspects Fire resistant, no ash to lament Purity vibrant, our lives thus far led Sky overhead Life span centuries, in bliss throb perfect For Mother Earth, we have utmost respect Sunlight our food, upon which we are fed Useful we are, long after we are dead Pristine presence, no desires to ferret Sky overhead 24-January-2021 If I were a ? Poetry contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 2/4/2021 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a great tree you picked the Sequoia redwood tall. A wonderful write and information. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...............
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Interesting, isn’t it, writing on a variety of topics, with heart veering towards oneness everywhere?
Date: 2/4/2021 12:59:00 PM
So majestically portrayed U. S. thank you for joining, and congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:17:00 PM
Thanks, Mystic!
Date: 1/24/2021 3:46:00 AM
Lovely. I enjoyed this one. I haven't ever tried this form and need to. God bless you always sweet friend. You're a blessing to my heart. With love and prayers
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Date: 1/24/2021 4:18:00 AM
Thanks, Regina! Your comments are always inspiring and rejuvenating!

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