Saksham Jain Poet Personification

If I Were a Sparrow

19.7.2020
  If I Were A Sparrow 

I thought If I were a sparrow ....
I would be free from every sorrow,
I would glide in the sky as fast as an arrow,
accelerate in every corner thick or narrow ,
But Now my life has only one stage ,
to be locked in a Cage,
This gives me a lot of rage .
There is nothing rare like me a  sparrow so brown, 
Is my species really going to drawn,
Thinking of this my face will always frown ,
Because there is nothing like me a sparrow so brown!

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Aditi Mishra August 2, 2020 at 4:27 AM Honest words Saksham. Sparrows are receding in numbers these days. That's so sad. Congratulations on your win! Saksham Jain August 2, 2020 at 9:13 AM Thank you so much Aditi for your appreciation.

Tania Kitchin August 1, 2020 at 1:05 PM Saksham, congratulations on your winning placement, liked the creativity. Saksham Jain August 1, 2020 at 11:36 PM Thank you so much Tania for appreciation .this will remember forever as it's my 1st placement here .

Caren Krutsinger July 21, 2020 at 11:04 PM Poignant and deep, well reflected feelings in poetry form. Saksham Jain July 22, 2020 at 7:00 AM Thanks you so much for appreciating my poem