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If I Were a Sparrow

19.7.2020 If I Were A Sparrow I thought If I were a sparrow .... I would be free from every sorrow, I would glide in the sky as fast as an arrow, accelerate in every corner thick or narrow , But Now my life has only one stage , to be locked in a Cage, This gives me a lot of rage . There is nothing rare like me a sparrow so brown, Is my species really going to drawn, Thinking of this my face will always frown , Because there is nothing like me a sparrow so brown!

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Date: 8/2/2020 4:27:00 AM
Honest words Saksham. Sparrows are receding in numbers these days. That's so sad. Congratulations on your win!
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Saksham Jain
Date: 8/2/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Aditi for your appreciation.
Date: 8/1/2020 1:05:00 PM
Saksham, congratulations on your winning placement, liked the creativity.
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Saksham Jain
Date: 8/1/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Tania for appreciation .this will remember forever as it's my 1st placement here .
Date: 7/21/2020 11:04:00 PM
Poignant and deep, well reflected feelings in poetry form.
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Saksham Jain
Date: 7/22/2020 7:00:00 AM
Thanks you so much for appreciating my poem

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