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If I Were

If I were a star I would flash and shine brighter than all others to be the one illuminating the infinite beauty of your face for all the heavens. If I were a bird, for seasons soaring o'r awe-inspiring lands, upon seeing your smile, I would cease flight to flutter around you; to ever gaze upon you, for all other beauty would be less than you. If I were the wind, once at your side, I would no more wander, wanting only to gently caress your cheek; to surround and memorize you with my breezes all coming days. But I am just a man, a face living to shine upon you as do the stars; whose journey, like the birds', wants to forever halt to gaze beauty's pinnacle in your face; with arms to encircle you like the wind; and hands to lace into yours like the breeze, gently caressing your face for all my days. Copyright 2016 Byron Magbee

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Date: 6/15/2016 1:08:00 PM
Makes a girl weak in the knees to have a man's love and adoration such as this. Such touching sentiment! Well well done! ~Trudy~
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Date: 5/29/2016 4:56:00 AM
Deeply touching and what better compliment I could give is to say it reminded me of a poem I wrote but have not posted. Excellent.
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Byron Magbee
Date: 5/29/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thanks, Phil. It makes me smile to know that you have similar emotions on the brink of expression. If you finish that work, I hope you will ping me here and share it. I sincerely appreciate your taking in my poem and sharing your thoughts thereon. Byron
Date: 5/29/2016 3:43:00 AM
Nicely done Byron...Linda
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Byron Magbee
Date: 5/29/2016 7:42:00 AM
Thanks again, Linda. Byron

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