If I Was An Elephant

Gorgeous  trust me ( real title) 

I look at you, you'er as skinny as can be. 
You look in the mirror it's an elephant you see.
Gorgeous comes in big and small , trust me.
But beautiful is what I see, before me.

You're as pretty as a picture, cute as can be.
Like a flower off a Japanese cherry tree.
So charming and gracious so carefree . 
You would be any mans cup of tea. 

I hope these words will make you see.
You're the jam on my scone the sugar in my Tea.
The girl of my dreams the one for me.
Now give us a cuddle ya silly old be .  


comp entry 06122016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/7/2016 8:08:00 AM
Well this gave me a smile,Stephen, I 'm not sure what to write for this contest might not :-( anyway good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 12/7/2016 8:53:00 AM
my work is done eve if it raised a smile cheers stephen
Date: 12/7/2016 3:07:00 AM
Awww, I love this poem, it's such a refreshing different way of looking at the contest. Good luck to you :)
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Date: 12/7/2016 3:38:00 AM
many thanks darren I do try to come at the comps from a fresh angle
Date: 12/6/2016 9:14:00 AM
Stephen, such a sweet poem. I like it. :)
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Date: 12/6/2016 4:07:00 PM
thanks heidi was looking for that a nice poem stephen
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