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If I - Tryodine

If I      (Tryodine) form of poetry by Yancy Dalton

If I were a fly I could fly
If I were a bee I could be
If I were a person I would be me

Diana Dalton
10 Aug 2012

Copyright © Diana Dalton | Year Posted 2012

funnyinspirationalintrospectionphilosophyhaiku

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August 11, 2012 at 11:59 AM

this was awesome.. Nicely done I have never seen this form done before.. Cory

August 11, 2012 at 7:16 PM

Thank you Cory. No it is not known here yet but is on my other poetry group. http://lightxpressions.hubpages.com/hub/Tryodine

August 11, 2012 at 11:02 AM

you are a poet so write,lol,great write Diana

August 11, 2012 at 7:21 PM

Getting there Richard. That's just part of the experience of being me.Thanks for the feed back!looking forward to meeting everyone!

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