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If I Take a Tour

If I take a tour deep down my heart I shall find out what neutralizes me…I shall know my ability to think Of how pure a soul can be..I shall know why a baby wants to grow All the reasons why only the sun is the one that shall glow…I shall find out that all ..... Things I have will fade away slow….i would know why I’m confused at this moment

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/14/2025 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.

Darren White

Date: 9/28/2017 8:49:00 AM

Those are deep questions, with a lot of internal rhyme. I'd say this is a Free Verse. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)