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If I Pass Away

If I die and go Will lonely tears fall? Will the butterflies, The birds in the sky Sing and dance sad songs? Will they miss me? Grieve and deplore? I now wonder What would they feel? If I leave My spirit Will remain Like clouds Drift in Bliss

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Arturo Michael

Date: 9/7/2018 10:29:00 AM

Only when it's time to go you will know...Good questions in poem...All the best

Karen Da
Date: 9/7/2018 12:10:00 PM

Yeah, and I hope I'd be able to know. Thanks a lot..

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/30/2018 2:36:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Karen, a nice work in a tough form:)

Karen Da
Date: 8/30/2018 8:22:00 AM

Thank u Jo. You inspired me to learn more. God bless!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2018 7:07:00 PM

Yes, you would be missed. Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work. Your presence at my work was uplifting. Sara

Karen Da
Date: 8/20/2018 7:54:00 AM

Thank u for your touching message Sara. May God bless u..

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/4/2018 1:21:00 PM

Peaceful you'll be..

Karen Da
Date: 8/5/2018 8:55:00 AM

Yeah, I hope. Thank u Arturo..

Chris Green

Date: 7/28/2018 11:14:00 AM

Deep thoughts presented in beautifully enchanting verses. Really nice.

Karen Da
Date: 7/28/2018 8:42:00 PM

Thank u so much!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/27/2018 12:13:00 PM

Lovely ink :) xomo

Karen Da
Date: 7/27/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thank u! :-)