Karen Da Poet Diminished Hexaverse

If I Pass Away

If I die and go
Will lonely tears fall?
Will the butterflies,
The birds in the sky
Sing and dance sad songs?

Will they miss me?
Grieve and deplore?
I now wonder
What would they feel?

If I leave
My spirit
Will remain

Like clouds
Drift in

Bliss

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Arturo Michael September 7, 2018 at 10:29 AM Only when it's time to go you will know...Good questions in poem...All the best Karen Da September 7, 2018 at 12:10 PM Yeah, and I hope I'd be able to know. Thanks a lot..

Joanna Daniel August 30, 2018 at 2:36 AM Beautiful poem, Karen, a nice work in a tough form:) Karen Da August 30, 2018 at 8:22 AM Thank u Jo. You inspired me to learn more. God bless!

Sara Kendrick August 19, 2018 at 7:07 PM Yes, you would be missed. Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work. Your presence at my work was uplifting. Sara Karen Da August 20, 2018 at 7:54 AM Thank u for your touching message Sara. May God bless u..

Arturo Michael August 4, 2018 at 1:21 PM Peaceful you'll be.. Karen Da August 5, 2018 at 8:55 AM Yeah, I hope. Thank u Arturo..

Chris Green July 28, 2018 at 11:14 AM Deep thoughts presented in beautifully enchanting verses. Really nice. Karen Da July 28, 2018 at 8:42 PM Thank u so much!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 27, 2018 at 12:13 PM Lovely ink :) xomo Karen Da July 27, 2018 at 12:20 PM Thank u! :-)