If I Lost Track

I am evanescent,
I have doubts.
I am jaded under gray clouds.
Want to pass you through, yet uncertainty holds me in blue.

I know for once you are a help!
But why my psyche is uncertain?
Is there a triumph or loss of hope?
Still, part of me yells “take it and keep going.”

Your longitude posits fears and trepidations
Your stance says, “You should not fear”
Grant me a lucent hope as I cross over your trace.
Should I stop at the middle, console me with sagacity.
Until, I steadfastly arrived at the end of this prophecy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 9:14 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 23, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Jade, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 16, 2016 at 3:55 PM
awesome poem..Jade, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **
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