Chris Green Poet Rhyme

If I Look In My Heart

If I look in my heart

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I woke up this morning
the sun it was shining
Its light through the window
was all I could see

It’s then that I noticed
the gray clouds now calling
Just another day
that was waiting for me

Oh how I wish
for a beautiful sunrise
Glowing the heavens
as dawn does embrace

But only find rain
pouring down on this morning
While longing to see
the smile on your face

It’s funny it seems
every day this does happen
I wake to the sun,
glistening dew for a spell

Till my eyes focus
and peer at the drizzle
That dampens my world
when you’re not feeling well

Still I press on
as if all is quite normal
Head out the door,
face the day that does start

For this I know
on these days cold and lonely
You are always here
if I look in my heart

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Indiana Shaw February 3, 2020 at 8:29 PM Waterproof jacket on Chris, keep that special person within your heart warm and protected . . . : ) Chris Green February 4, 2020 at 7:42 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

Charmaine Chircop January 31, 2020 at 4:09 PM A positive message..The clouds might be gray.. with a drizzle of rain..reflecting life's pain..but in the heart..In the heart that loves so much..the sun will cast its spell.She will always be there. Lovely poem .So nice to read you again. Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 4:23 PM So nice to see you again my friend. Thank you so very much for your kind words on my poem. I truly do appreciate you.

Arturo Michael January 31, 2020 at 3:51 PM "for a spell" I like this phrase , it says a lot...especially of the changing weather of life...but love remain in the heart regardless...Well done Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 3:53 PM Thanks so much Arturo. For a spell is a southern thing here. :) I appreciate your kind thoughts.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 31, 2020 at 2:01 PM Hello Chris Green, I love this poem you created.Yes she is there if you look at your heart. Peace ,love, Joy. Darlene your friend. Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 2:06 PM Thank you so very much my friend for your nice comment. I am happy you liked this one.

John Hamilton January 31, 2020 at 1:13 PM Another excellent write Chris, always enjoy waking up to your writing, a great way to start the day...although it's already afternoon..lol! Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 1:20 PM It's about time you got up! : ) Thanks so very much John. I am glad you liked this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2020 at 1:00 PM - We've had rain and gray clouds for 5 months now ... thankfully my heart is warm :) - Thanks for this wonderful poem, Chris :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 1:20 PM Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kindness Anne-Lise, always.

Sandra Adams January 31, 2020 at 11:32 AM sigh... that end sums up this beautiful poem wonderfully...this was a delight to read this morning... cloudy dreary looking here too... good afternoon Chris... hugs Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 11:35 AM I am happy you liked this one Sandy. Yep, another dreary day here too.

Gershon Wolf January 31, 2020 at 11:19 AM Methinks you wake up to the sun before you focus, because the of the love in your heart for your beloved. Makes all the difference in life --- to love and to be loved. No better feeling. Nicely penned, Chris! Cheers, Gershon Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 11:35 AM Methinks you are far too kind my friend. Thank you so much GW.