Freddie Robinson Jr. Poet Enclosed Rhyme

If I Have the Time of Day

If I have the time of day,
I would wish you coined thoughts so unwell
Alexander ringing blues, Philly cracked Bell:
Work call ain’t the play

If I have the last hour
to tap dance on your glass ceiling
Hope I'D short circuit HR feelings — 
Ire harassment power

If I have the final minute,
let the Big Hand leap frog open
Slap the Prince Vex on the chin,
be free-spirit independent

If I have a/C-terminal second,
Me would nano pace outta the revolving door
Do a W. Wallace braveheart unbowed encore
This be my sabbatical beckon


*a/Cubicle-terminal


Written: 12-11-2019
Contest:  If I have the Time For an Enclosed Rhyme
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2020 at 2:21 PM this is cool and jazzy sounding. Congrats in the contest.

Alexis Y. January 12, 2020 at 12:16 PM Hi Freddie, I am so happy to see you standing in the winner’s circle. Congratulations my friend! Have a fantabulous day! :-) Alexis

Tania Kitchin January 12, 2020 at 5:46 AM Freddie, congratulations on your winning placement with your well penned poem, fun and creative imagery!

Panagiota Romios December 14, 2019 at 9:03 PM Best wishes Panagiota

Eve Roper December 12, 2019 at 10:35 PM Well done, Freddie, good luck in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues December 12, 2019 at 9:37 PM Fave line: Alexander ringing blues, Philly cracked Bell:

Andrea Dietrich December 12, 2019 at 7:20 PM very modern sounding, Freddie. I recall your poetry always has that contemporary vibe. Great job.

Alexis Y. December 12, 2019 at 9:17 AM WoW! Freddie, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I agree with Caren,this is well written and has a good flow. Your rhymes are not forced thery are on point. Well done my talented and amazing friend. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Chris Green December 12, 2019 at 7:54 AM This was really cool my friend. Love the feel, the vibe and the crafting of this contest piece. If I had the time, I'd say more but gotta run. :)

Caren Krutsinger December 12, 2019 at 4:01 AM This made me smile. I did not even recognize it as an enclosed rhyme which is a compliment for most of them sound forced. "If I have the final minute, let the Big Hand leap frog open Slap the Prince Vex on the chin, be free-spirit independent" Love it!