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If I Have the Time of Day

If I have the time of day, I would wish you coined thoughts so unwell Alexander ringing blues, Philly cracked Bell: Work call ain’t the play If I have the last hour to tap dance on your glass ceiling Hope I'D short circuit HR feelings — Ire harassment power If I have the final minute, let the Big Hand leap frog open Slap the Prince Vex on the chin, be free-spirit independent If I have a/C-terminal second, Me would nano pace outta the revolving door Do a W. Wallace braveheart unbowed encore This be my sabbatical beckon *a/Cubicle-terminal Written: 12-11-2019 Contest: If I have the Time For an Enclosed Rhyme Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2020 2:21:00 PM

this is cool and jazzy sounding. Congrats in the contest.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2020 12:16:00 PM

Hi Freddie, I am so happy to see you standing in the winner’s circle. Congratulations my friend! Have a fantabulous day! :-) Alexis

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/12/2020 5:46:00 AM

Freddie, congratulations on your winning placement with your well penned poem, fun and creative imagery!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/14/2019 9:03:00 PM

Best wishes Panagiota

Eve Roper

Date: 12/12/2019 10:35:00 PM

Well done, Freddie, good luck in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/12/2019 9:37:00 PM

Fave line: Alexander ringing blues, Philly cracked Bell:

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2019 7:20:00 PM

very modern sounding, Freddie. I recall your poetry always has that contemporary vibe. Great job.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/12/2019 9:17:00 AM

WoW! Freddie, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I agree with Caren,this is well written and has a good flow. Your rhymes are not forced thery are on point. Well done my talented and amazing friend. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 12/12/2019 7:54:00 AM

This was really cool my friend. Love the feel, the vibe and the crafting of this contest piece. If I had the time, I'd say more but gotta run. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/12/2019 4:01:00 AM

This made me smile. I did not even recognize it as an enclosed rhyme which is a compliment for most of them sound forced. "If I have the final minute, let the Big Hand leap frog open Slap the Prince Vex on the chin, be free-spirit independent" Love it!