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If I Had One Wish

So many thoughts come to mind If only I could really go back in time Change or undo my life’s violent and sexual crimes Tell those around me to open their eyes Pay Attention to the signs If only one wish could really rewind Those pedophilic hands of my life-time… Then I stopped and started to think Who would I be if this didn’t happen to me? What of the woman I’d come to be The wisdom I’d come to see And my children who’s lives are abuse free As a result of my past… my history… Now, with eyes wide and mind free Heart pounding, air, LOVE and life in me Blessed with children to change my legacy, Equipped with words and strength to share my story… my poetry I’d wish only to open the eyes of the blind The mouths of the abused and the hearts of our society… I’d make them see… I’d make them see So no other child has to end up like me… Lay
** For the "If I Had One Wish Contest"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/23/2011 5:22:00 PM
i was lucky enough to have a protected and abuse free childhood and it is hard for me to picture the life of a little girl in this way. It is too sad. You have done well with this poem. Thank you for my 4th place in your contest. I told it exactly as it wa. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2011 5:52:00 PM
Thank you all for your comments! Hopefully our wishes and prayers will one day be answered...Lay
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Date: 5/26/2011 2:14:00 PM
Another soup mail Lay!!
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Date: 5/26/2011 2:02:00 PM
A powerful write, Walayee! If only people would "Pay attention to the signs". Oprah, who was a victim herself, is now a crusader of this topic. Children. so sweet and innocent, don't deserve to be exposed to these terrifying acts. Great poem..good luck with your winning write! Mikki
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:37:00 AM
Oh, dear Lay, I'm so sorry to hear you went through this. My heart goes out to you and obviously you've learned to protect your own children. Yours and Carol's entries are the best I've seen for the contest. Winning wishes headed your way. Powerful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:56:00 AM
Wow! Lay, i got goosebumps here. Me as a victim myself. I missed all the signs. Glad my end was not by his stupid hands. It's just sad to know how we fall to victims from age one. Good luck in the contest~luv*SKAT
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:33:00 PM
Full of pathos and atonement with self confidence, Walayee
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:01:00 PM
i have sent you mail Lay!!
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:40:00 AM
For sure a winning write. Good luck to you in the contest, Lay.
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:35:00 AM
This is part of my advocacy, lay... a very strong and passionate write of hope and renewal; fascinating! best winnning wishes..:) huggs, nette
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