If I Fade

If I fade will you still be
The person that looked at me
With fondness that was inexplicable
And love that was impeccable

If I fade will you remember 
The days when we remained apart
But knew what was happening in each others heart.

If I fade will you go to places
That was once a dwelling of the memories of our past 
And smile with the nostalgic moments
That made our love long that last.

If I fade please do not lament
Because what lies in past can’t be undone 
But move towards eternity without disruption
Cause you were to me a song 
That could never be complete 
and even the most prepossessing words were obsolete

If I fade I’ll try to communicate 
But it will be arduous cause I am leaving the gate
That stand separating  the bond that we shared
To complete the journey that lord creates
Nobody can exterminate  my reminiscence and love
Look into the stars I'll be above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 17, 2017 at 8:24 AM
The thing is that we will all fade, when someone loves you truly, they will not care.. well written Chris.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Ron Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Thank you...
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December 16, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Loved reading this, especially the emotional feeling. Welcome to PS.
Ron Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 1:57 AM
Thank you... Hope you will like my other poems as well..
Johnson Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Although you alter the balance in your stanzas, the lines flow easy and the emotion can be felt. Your rhyme and rhythm works well and would look good in a quatrain structure as well. Have a great day
Ron Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 1:58 AM
Thank you.. Will follow your advice
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