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If I Fade

If I fade will you still be The person that looked at me With fondness that was inexplicable And love that was impeccable If I fade will you remember The days when we remained apart But knew what was happening in each others heart. If I fade will you go to places That was once a dwelling of the memories of our past And smile with the nostalgic moments That made our love long that last. If I fade please do not lament Because what lies in past can’t be undone But move towards eternity without disruption Cause you were to me a song That could never be complete and even the most prepossessing words were obsolete If I fade I’ll try to communicate But it will be arduous cause I am leaving the gate That stand separating the bond that we shared To complete the journey that lord creates Nobody can exterminate my reminiscence and love Look into the stars I'll be above

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Date: 12/17/2017 8:24:00 AM
The thing is that we will all fade, when someone loves you truly, they will not care.. well written Chris.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Chris Ron
Date: 12/17/2017 9:12:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 12/16/2017 6:50:00 PM
Loved reading this, especially the emotional feeling. Welcome to PS.
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Chris Ron
Date: 12/17/2017 1:57:00 AM
Thank you... Hope you will like my other poems as well..
Date: 12/16/2017 3:24:00 PM
Although you alter the balance in your stanzas, the lines flow easy and the emotion can be felt. Your rhyme and rhythm works well and would look good in a quatrain structure as well. Have a great day
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Date: 12/17/2017 1:58:00 AM
Thank you.. Will follow your advice

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