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If I died

Just when I thought I could trust just a little bit just a tiny bit inside. I got slapped with reality.
Now if i were to kill myself right now, what would it matter to me anyways. 
I'll be gone and done. My spirit would float away and disappear into another reality..
The sky falls and and the grounds stay still. 
If I were to die. No one would really cry. 
The people beside me would move aside . 
No more pain. No more pain.
The life I breathe is now far behind. 
Silence my murder, silence my thoughts. 
Cause life falls back ... If I died. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/18/2016 11:24:00 PM
KEYLEE, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2016 10:05:00 PM
Deep write and thoughts Keylee, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/16/2016 5:15:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........
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