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If I Didn'T Think What I Think

If I didn't think what I think, I’d think what I don’t Would I laugh while you cry? Would I enjoy if you moaned? If I didn't think what I think, I’d be a gangster by now I’d never pay any bills, I’d hack the system somehow If I didn't think what I think, I‘d have no respect for boys I wouldn’t appreciate the good ones, just use them like toys If I didn't think what I think, I would be studying at this moment I have my exam tomorrow, I just hope I don’t repent Spending all my time on PS, making poems all the time Cuz that’s what I enjoy doing most, I’m having my time!….

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Date: 9/15/2012 2:32:00 PM
lovely write, my friend - yes, I know how addictive Soup is, lol
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Date: 9/14/2012 10:45:00 PM
excellent apoorva with some tremendous lines luv .. I like the part of the gangster and paying no bills .. classic ..u made it your own .. much success luv..
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Date: 9/14/2012 12:36:00 PM
nicely penned ...enjoyed...best wishes in the contest
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Date: 9/13/2012 7:11:00 AM
sounds like a plan to me.....what fun that would be!
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Date: 9/12/2012 10:59:00 PM
I hope you did well in your exam and time spent here was not an hinderance. Thanks for reading me. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/12/2012 9:01:00 PM
GREAT fun you had with this one and I am loving it too!!!
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Date: 9/12/2012 1:00:00 PM
Very interesting thoughts here. Loved it thoroughly - keep up the excellent work. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/12/2012 11:32:00 AM
Hi Apoorva ..I loved this one ..there's so much a student can relate to . Loved the line-- I just hope I don't repent :D
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Date: 9/12/2012 8:45:00 AM
I really like your 2nd and 3rd stanzas - great ideas! good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/11/2012 9:18:00 AM
A poem about what life's all about for you dear apoorva, wonderfully written, brings cultures so much closer together............
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Date: 9/10/2012 3:58:00 PM
hahahah...the distracted student who should have just majored in poetry...right?...Fun and transparent write. Enjoyed. ") gwendolen
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