Apoorva Patrikar Poet Couplet

If I Didn'T Think What I Think

If I didn't think what I think, I’d think what I don’t
Would I laugh while you cry? Would I enjoy if you moaned?

If I didn't think what I think, I’d be a gangster by now
I’d never pay any bills, I’d hack the system somehow

If I didn't think what I think, I‘d have no respect for boys
I wouldn’t appreciate the good ones, just use them like toys

If I didn't think what I think, I would be studying at this moment
I have my exam tomorrow, I just hope I don’t repent
Spending all my time on PS, making poems all the time
Cuz that’s what I enjoy doing most, I’m having my time!….

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Jack Horne September 15, 2012 at 2:32 PM lovely write, my friend - yes, I know how addictive Soup is, lol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 14, 2012 at 10:45 PM excellent apoorva with some tremendous lines luv .. I like the part of the gangster and paying no bills .. classic ..u made it your own .. much success luv..

Joseph May September 14, 2012 at 12:36 PM nicely penned ...enjoyed...best wishes in the contest

Doris Culverhouse September 13, 2012 at 7:11 AM sounds like a plan to me.....what fun that would be!

Joy Wellington September 12, 2012 at 10:59 PM I hope you did well in your exam and time spent here was not an hinderance. Thanks for reading me. One love. Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2012 at 9:01 PM GREAT fun you had with this one and I am loving it too!!!

Laura Breidenthal September 12, 2012 at 1:00 PM Very interesting thoughts here. Loved it thoroughly - keep up the excellent work. Always, Laura

Ria Vij September 12, 2012 at 11:32 AM Hi Apoorva ..I loved this one ..there's so much a student can relate to . Loved the line-- I just hope I don't repent :D

Black Eyed Susan September 12, 2012 at 8:45 AM I really like your 2nd and 3rd stanzas - great ideas! good luck in the contest :)

Harry Horsman September 11, 2012 at 9:18 AM A poem about what life's all about for you dear apoorva, wonderfully written, brings cultures so much closer together............

Gwendolen Song September 10, 2012 at 3:58 PM hahahah...the distracted student who should have just majored in poetry...right?...Fun and transparent write. Enjoyed. ") gwendolen